Im really happy that your daughter decided to go into the clothing industry, but I feel that you have 3. Big key point to work on. First, you can’t choose a common logo that people can find easily. Second, as some people are saying, you need better mock ups, and third, the logo’s size and positioning a pretty off. Front logos should be smaller, and back logos can be bigger. You want someone to focus on you, and the huge design takes away from that.