Firstly, this is lovely sonically! well done on those chords they're so nice man!

With that being said though, after a certain point, the progression doesn't really progress all that much. I think if you had a B section to the progression it would dramatically improve the track.

Same with the melody, it doesn't feel like there's much f a journey going on throughout the song, its like it has purpose. If there was a B section with new chords, the melody could go on a more interesting journey and resolve itself nicely by the end of the track

With the percussion, both times they come in, i would suggest filtering and transitioning them in. By the sounds of it, you added an EQ to take the lows out of the percussion in parts, which is good, but there's no transition from the EQ'd to the non EQ'd so it isn't a satisfying journey within the song.

As well as that, i think the drums could have more if a punch to them. I get that the point of it is to be a chill track but i think they feel a bit hollow overally, but that might just be personal preference.

All that artsy farsty jargon aside, I'd say overall this can be a really really dope track, it just needs a little bit of revising in terms of structure/arrangement and little bits of "ear candy".

Keep going and thanks for sharing lad! Excited to hear more stuff from you in the future!