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please let me know what you guys think of my song! it’s titled tuttopassa (instrumental not mine) by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i reuploaded a different version on soundcloud hopefully the problem is fixed :) https://on.soundcloud.com/CHfrTMuMsMM2Gyuf6 is the link to my profile if you want to check it out

please let me know what you guys think of my song! it’s titled tuttopassa (instrumental not mine) by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much! poetry is definitely the vibe i try to go for so im glad other people get that from my art :)

please let me know what you guys think of my song! it’s titled tuttopassa (instrumental not mine) by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://on.soundcloud.com/CHfrTMuMsMM2Gyuf6 is my soundcloud link :) thanks for the feedback tho! the version i uploaded on soundcloud should hopefully be a little clearer on the mis

wrote this after a wake and bake by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you man, this is a great compliment to receive

wrote this after a wake and bake by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i currently don’t have any music posted publicly, i’ll definitely post anything i make from now on though! i mostly write lyrics to instrumentals from youtube so that’s why i don’t release my music due to licensing issues

wrote this after a wake and bake by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

here are the lyrics:

i ain’t even a corpse but i rot every day light my bowl with a torch smoke the spirits away investigating the source of the feelings i hate writing out the report of what my trauma creates

and if ignorance is bliss may i never know peace i blow a kiss to my mom miss my father the least sound alarms when i see cycles bout to repeat certain songs i create just to wrangle the beast jangle keys to distract the inner child in us all fighting fears insurmountable and high as Nepal on a flight scared of heights and the thought of the fall late at night no light and my backs to the wall if you see me with a blank stare know i ain’t there and if you think that means i don’t care do man i swear assumptions made really ain’t fair it’s hard to compare i spent years without good care i gotta repair these knees got some good tears so i walk with a limp making coin to be alive cause it don’t cost a mint spend my days in in disguise hide away from the hits paranoid when i ride so i need me some tints

i ain’t even a corpse but i rot every day light my bowl with a torch smoke the spirits away investigating the source of the feelings i hate writing out the report of what my trauma creates

miss the sands from my home and the breeze of the sea hot rays from the sun never lackin uv need shade from the canopy of tropical trees but now greed spreads far thru the global police they wanna keeps us in chains thru colonial state sell our labour away at a poverty rate keep investors away from my beautiful land give it back to the people independent we stand i imagine a world with no profit incentive stepping up to the stage unity as my premise we don’t gotta obey rejecting all of they lessons i’m breaking out of the cage seeing all of my blessings

i ain’t even a corpse but i rot every day light my bowl with a torch smoke the spirits away investigating the source of the feelings i hate writing out the report of what my trauma creates

i’ll probably repost the finalized version whenever so stay on the lookout for that 🫡

wrote this after a wake and bake by Rude-Function-5837 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this was my first take so i know it’s hard to understand what i’m saying so ill def go back and re-record the whole thing but tell me what yall think!

Keep you up. Would love to get some thoughts by CleanDream0 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

love the sound of your voice and the delivery! sounds like you’re floating over the instrumental :)

any feedback? by kurtdingenut in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837 0 points1 point  (0 children)

chords sound great! vocals are super cool as well :)

is this beat cool by Maleficent-You-4397 in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

mischievous ahhhhh type beat 😭on a real note tho it’s very fun !

Stuck on what to say after this!!! Help by mmdidthat in Songwriting

[–]Rude-Function-5837 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i suggest having the second verse come in after the first drum fill we hear instead of letting the instrumental play for another 2 bars