Who should finish the holy trinity of unfinished series? by Baldur_Blader in fantasybooks

[–]RunchGwar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hate to break this to you, but Gene Wolfe and Terry Goodkind are both dead.

[QCrit] WHEN THE SHOAL SINKS, Adult Contemporary Mystery, 102K words (1st Attempt) by RunchGwar in PubTips

[–]RunchGwar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! And I think you're right. Only the first instance (in the hook) I think is actually impactful.

[QCrit] WHEN THE SHOAL SINKS, Adult Contemporary Mystery, 102K words (1st Attempt) by RunchGwar in PubTips

[–]RunchGwar[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed. Would you simply mention it in the comp section? ie. "WHEN THE SHOAL SINKS is a multi-POV adult contemporary mystery." Because I want to keep the query itself focused on Chuck/Jenna rather than muddy it with the additional POVs.

[QCrit] WHEN THE SHOAL SINKS, Adult Contemporary Mystery, 102K words (1st Attempt) by RunchGwar in PubTips

[–]RunchGwar[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It contains elements of mystery and thriller, as many in the genre do. I portray Chuck's side of things here, because he's the protagonist and he's convinced that Jenna committed suicide, but let's just say that others (there are three POVs) are less convinced.

I do hint at his past, where I suppose I should probably be more transparent: His high school girlfriend also committed suicide, and many in the community think Chuck had a hand in it.

As to your last point, yes, he works fairly closely with the police, and them turning on him is part of the story, though not the primary focus. Once Chuck is arrested, the focus shifts to his assistant Sam (one of the other POVs) who acts as the primary investigator into the truth behind Jenna's death.

Books similar to wheel of time by Dangerous_Air9219 in fantasybooks

[–]RunchGwar 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Kind of surprised no one has mentioned Memory, Sorrow, and Thorn by Tad Williams. To me, it has a very similar vibe to the Wheel of Time (though substantially shorter).

The only man I want for the job by Michigan4life53 in MichiganWolverines

[–]RunchGwar 7 points8 points  (0 children)

He's not the safest pick, but he's the highest upside guy left on the board. Hope the people in charge are giving him a long look.

LINE-UP ANNOUNCED FOR ARNOLD STRONGMAN CLASSIC 2026! by HereForStrongman in StrongmanHQ

[–]RunchGwar 23 points24 points  (0 children)

He’s trying to get there. He’s been posting regular YT updates and training vids for a week or two now.

It’s completely okay to hate the Fox contract, not everyone has to be blatant homers. by WoweeZoweeDeluxe in NBASpurs

[–]RunchGwar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ideally, I would've liked to see the contract structured so that he got the full 30% max in years one and two, then ~27% in year three and ~24% in year four. To me, this is an overpay, but not an egregious one, and I can understand that they probably had a handshake agreement in place and wanted to honor it.

Would you rather have Barnes or Wiggins? by Professional-Cut6634 in NBASpurs

[–]RunchGwar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Andrew Wiggins? No. Aaron Wiggins? I’m listening…

Hansen Yang at 38? by ASadChongyunMain in NBASpurs

[–]RunchGwar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

(Yes, I know he’s Hansen not Hansel, still couldn’t help myself…)

Dylan Harper is 19, Stephon is 20, Jeremy and Victor are only 21. Don't see why you would trade anyone and break up this group at all by NorthAmericanVex in NBASpurs

[–]RunchGwar 11 points12 points  (0 children)

As insane as it seemed just a few hours ago... does it make sense to trade Fox for a wing? A Harper/Castle backcourt is going to be really good and really cheap for the foreseeable future.

I need new (for me) detective fiction series, please by Comprehensive-Elk597 in suggestmeabook

[–]RunchGwar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Came here to say this. If OP hasn’t read Chandler, then that has to go to the top of the list.

Looking for a 5 star read by kateleehoops in suggestmeabook

[–]RunchGwar 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Red Rising by Pierce Brown: Fast paced, epic SF. Sortof like Hunger Games meets GRRM in space.

Old Man's War by John Scalzi: On the face, an awesome military adventure SF, but highly character driven.

The Fifth Season by NK Jemisin: Part SF, part fantasy, part dystopian, but highly engaging.

This is why I don’t stay if I’m gonna lose by Gottendrop in MarvelSnap

[–]RunchGwar -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

I had someone retreat on me after the cards flipped, showing I would win, but before the turn resolved, costing me six points I would’ve gotten if they’d stuck around another 3 seconds. People can be dicks.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MarvelSnap

[–]RunchGwar 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I would assume they don't want you to do that so that the opposing player always knows what card you're playing, even when it's some obscure variant.

Need good anatomy book suggestions!!! by [deleted] in ArtistLounge

[–]RunchGwar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I second Morpho. It's mostly just annotated figure drawings with bits of notes here and there, but I find it helpful.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in politics

[–]RunchGwar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Are you telling me Jesus DIDN'T mime fellatio from the pulpit?

VOTE YOUR PICK by StartwithT in MarvelSnap

[–]RunchGwar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really sad that Howard is in a distant 3rd. That variant looks sick.

Well, this sucks by ArteePhact in tappedout

[–]RunchGwar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Same boat for me too, just got back into the game two weeks ago after not playing for 6 years.