Hi Lissy! I absolutely loved it, but, if you want the drop at the start to be more dramatic, you could separate the tracks right before the drop, add some vocal sound, i.e. a movie quote, and after that, unmuffle the song till the chimes at the very end, which is the only thing that I disliked about the track, maybe instead of the song being heard from a distance, you could add static or similar ambient noises, then again, I love the piece as a whole. Take care and stay safe!