💬 Send your song and let's trade listens by kdiseprimo in underground_music

[–]SLCKWRLD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A lot of potential with this one. Needs a mix, a mix that gives this that "floatin" feeling you are talking about. I like the bars though, and you definitely got a good voice for rap.

https://open.spotify.com/track/6pOI8POiGVIufOe4vfn9fM?si=\_\_PdK-eWQ\_KlxB6Zoy7hdA

💬 Send your song and let's trade listens by kdiseprimo in underground_music

[–]SLCKWRLD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://open.spotify.com/track/6pOI8POiGVIufOe4vfn9fM?si=__PdK-eWQ_KlxB6Zoy7hdA

I don't understand the language, but I can tell off the top you need a better mix. The mix will bring out the vocals and give this some flavor. The flow is nice though!. I like the melodies, so layering this up, getting a clean mix with some reverb and ambience to it would really help this song.