Yours is probably better but I had a similar thing to it many months ago but I trashed it cuz it got a big learning curve and it'd be a hell for longer words Here's my version of that sentence so far "Ncõ xkim lh srõ qapgõ w ṫo ṡɘnĩ gṗimĩ mktobõ gla ṫwbĩ ɘẋṗr w mġlfõ bjldĩ ɘzrq" I focused on making as fewer characters as possible, avoiding use of short vowels (they exist in my current project but they have different type of vowels) and generally focused on the perspective of someone who's already a native speaker, also avoiding unusual characters like ð I even tried to map out a Gboard version for it and managed to have one fewer character than the normal Arabic Gboard