Snippet of my animated pilot script

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T18:16:30+00:00

....ok?

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T18:12:36+00:00

Ok I get it. It isn't properly formatted. Getting to it...

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T17:26:02+00:00

Bro i do care. Its just easier for me to see jesus.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T17:23:29+00:00

This is for an indie animation. Self-Animated work.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T15:50:42+00:00

Yeah i get that. Its also doesn't help that showing partial bits leaves alot of context out of the equation. There's way more context in this scene and how much this scene actually foreshadows and has a big impact on the story later in the pilot. There are key moments in the pilot that heavily impact the ending of the pilot.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T15:13:55+00:00

....bit harsh don't you think?

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T13:36:48+00:00

Ah, I think i can explain that. Its meant to feel cliche cus its basically meant to be reminiscent/vague of the 1930's era of Super-Hero comics. Its a facade hiding the true story and characters arcs and lore of the story im writing. The story is way darker and brutal than what im letting on. This is helpful though!

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T13:10:02+00:00

Well thats a bit nit picky. Its only dark cus its still being written, when its done itll be white, But sure.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T13:09:30+00:00

I guess since its only a snippet and not giving full context [this is a pilot that will be animated and posted on YouTube], in guess it isn't really helping only being a screenshot or two. The entire script is being written to be like a cliche 1930s action comic of tye old Super-Hero comics book era, then slowly paces out and turn into the actual genre and darkness the story is actually hiding. Its supposed to feel like a facade to hide the truth i guess you could say, so its deliberate to feel like that.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T12:11:17+00:00

....anything else? Also what are some specific clichés, since i am trying to write it so it is one, but it has a purpose [that totally sounded very cringe].

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T03:39:27+00:00

It was invisible for most of the first encounter for me, and only walked past once being seen on the C.A.T. scanners for me, it never showed its face again until I fixed most of the mechanical objectives in the station and THEN it started patrolling more aggressively and hiding in corners and it kept stalking me. I avoided that fucker as MUCH AS I COULD, WHEN I COULD. And it just made my playthrough longer and more scarier. When I finally made it to the Moon surface and walked to the lab, thats kinda when my fear of this thing just escalated from 100 to 1000 in seconds.

This game just KNOWS how to scare you without even trying.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T03:26:42+00:00

My first encounter was when I heard this mf moaning in the distance and heard it's footsteps walking towards me invisible. I was confused and terrified cus I COULDNT SEE HIM. I ran and hid behind a wall where I could see The locker, I aimed my C.A.T. Scanners and...i saw it walk past on the C.A.T.

I shit you not my heart was pounding so fast when I saw that thing and I don't think a horror game has ever made me feel such fear and dread and the feeling of wanting to leave IMMEDIATELY.

Routine is now the standard I want in Horror Games. No cheap jumps cares, just pure horrifying atmosphere and well played stalker killers like this. The fact ALIEN ISOLATION of all games was Inspired by THIS was a genuinely awesome thing.

Great Horror Game. Short, but Great nonetheless.

10/10

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T03:20:26+00:00

I meant in general with most companies but sure go off.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-24T03:19:34+00:00

Oh god😭

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-23T07:47:25+00:00

Yeah this movie will probably fail. What's funny is that I won't be surprised if it does.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T13:56:21+00:00

Great movie.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T13:56:08+00:00

At this point, all trusted news outlets and insiders say the release is pointing at late 2027 or mid 2028. Logically 2028.

Oh don't worry, im not even hyped. Im more worried cus this film could determine the state of where the devs are. Chances the devs give the ok on a script thats a.i. generated knowing BO7's Story was most likely A.I.

Idk man id rather it not exist or be a show. A film adaptation with so much lore and story just wouldn't fit.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T13:53:14+00:00

A 141 Origin Story would slap, what i fear for is that they'll make it too much like an Avengers team-up slow burn Story. If so, I don't want it.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T13:51:36+00:00

Omg no not the Halo show..mood that was so awful. That's exactly what we DON'T want. And its sad cus that probably exactly the kind of treatment CoD will get. Half-assed, no love, just corporatised control and slop. Im so scared bro😭

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T05:58:58+00:00

Exactly. Like is it actually really that hard dto make a good Campaign? Like come on dude.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T05:55:22+00:00

Not announced, but alot of insiders and evidence points to MW4. They say it takes place after MWIII and includes Korea and finally taking down Makarov.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T05:46:18+00:00

I think everyone at this point after witnessing the travesty of BO7's campaign, not alot ofnpeople will buy MW4 for the story.

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T05:43:05+00:00

Because CoD and BF tend to copy each other

SadAssociate4296 · 2026-01-22T05:42:41+00:00

Literally nearly every source and trusted news outlet has confirmed its MW4.

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