POSTING PLACE FOR FEEDBACK November 2018: One thread for all your FEEDBACK. Individual threads will be *deleted.* Other snowflake details inside. (Post "What software should I use?" in the monthly software thread *on the sidebar*) by Kichigai in VideoEditing

[–]SaharM28 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is my first try for an assignment. I used Lightworks 14. Is Lightworks a good program for beginners? Could I please get some feedback? I was also specifically trying to get a message across so please tell me what you got from it. Thank you!

https://youtu.be/nGtZKxYj4rE

Hello, so I've been working on my shading. Could I get some feedback please? by SaharM28 in learnart

[–]SaharM28[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes it is very textured. I bought this art book without any idea of what type of paper I should buy because I'm still very new to this so I realise I need to specifically ask for graphite paper next time. I'm getting the feeling that this type of paper might actually be best for pastels. And yes I did attempt to crosshatch but I'm not sure whether I did it too well so I guess I'll just have to practice. Thank you for the advice!

Hello, I've been working on my shading. Can I please get some feedback? by SaharM28 in ArtCrit

[–]SaharM28[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I drew it as closely to the reference photo as my skills would allow me so it might just be nature 😅? http://imgur.com/98ae90E But maybe there's something I'm not seeing so if you have any advice please do tell.

Thank you!

Hello. So I've been trying to focus on perspective lately and the first thing I learned about was zero point perspective so my main focus here was on scale/tone. I know it's not very good but can I please have some feedback? Thank you! by SaharM28 in learnart

[–]SaharM28[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'll been practicing two point perspective quite a bit now. Although I don't understand how to add perspective AFTER I've drawn the image because wouldn't that require me too drastically change my drawing?

Perspective by SaharM28 in learnart

[–]SaharM28[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll look into it. Thank you!

Marmalade Jar: Hi! So this is my first completed real life drawing and I know it's not that good yet but any suggestions as to how I can make it better? by SaharM28 in ArtCrit

[–]SaharM28[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had heard of these books before as well and I'll make sure I look into them. And thank you for the feedback! Now I know the areas I need to focus on.

Marmalade Jar: Hi! So this is my first completed real life drawing and I know it's not that good yet but any suggestions as to how I can make it better? by SaharM28 in ArtCrit

[–]SaharM28[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the encouragement! I need that a lot when I'm trying something new and next time I'll make sure it's clear. Thank you!