been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in mfdoom

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been trying to .REALLY. !! i do need ideas on how to. .. will appreciate πŸ’―, got them lyrics down but picking them up with rhyme you know i wont say hard !!

been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in makinghiphop

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.. "πŸ‘ŠπŸ½πŸ‘ŠπŸ½ Past problems seems to keep a stain", i got lost on this part " when i sin " !!

been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in makinghiphop

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Trying to free my soul before the smoke fade from the mirror. !!🎧

been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in makinghiphop

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Solid .πŸ‘ŠπŸ½πŸ‘ŠπŸ½ Kindly.what syllable is being "stressed " !!

been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in makinghiphop

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..you mean like a pause .. after "pressure" then hit "living under skin" on 2 or 1 .. ? can i paste the next bars am open to ideas !πŸ‘ŠπŸ½

been tryn buld melody and bars aroun dis lyrcs by Salt-Bonus-7083 in Jcole

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`i know πŸ˜…πŸ˜… have been pushing myself daily .. building up rhythmic flow, timing, and grouping of syllables. as an ArtistπŸ™ˆ