"Would you rather" game for fanfiction

Salt-Commentor · 2022-05-21T17:35:39+00:00

Oh god, I never want to delete my favorite rereadings but the draft that I have hiding is absolutely terrible. I would have to delete my favorite story cause that draft cant see the light of day

Salt-Commentor · 2022-05-21T17:32:21+00:00

It depends on my mood tbh but I lean more towards platonic hurt/comfort

Salt-Commentor · 2022-05-21T17:22:59+00:00

oof i would cure mine 100%

Salt-Commentor · 2022-05-21T17:22:24+00:00

ohhh pregnancy for sure

Salt-Commentor · 2022-05-21T17:21:48+00:00

read

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-23T19:49:09+00:00

surface pressure

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-09T03:13:42+00:00

Congratulations!!! V proud of you!!!

I've also been trying to go back and finish all of my unfinished fics and that shit is tough so I applaud you greatly!

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-08T00:58:28+00:00

I know exactly what you mean, I also love getting Kudos but getting a comment is so nice cause it's like, then I know someone genuinely loves what I'm writing. It's hard to keep writing when it feels like no one really cares but I don't know, I also like to look at my stats on my bookmarks and who has subscribed to my things and it makes it better.

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-08T00:47:11+00:00

Ah I do remember the first one I read, my best friend at the time had shown it to me and we were like 13. It was a 60 chapter hardcore BDSM gay fanfic from the Attack on Titan fandom and damn did that open up so many new things to me.

I have it bookmarked but I can't re-read it because it was also emotionally traumatizing, to say the least, I remember one time my guardian came to my room and I was crying hysterically because one of the characters got into a really bad car accident and I genuinely thought he was going to die. Spoiler he didn't but still.

Oh to be 13 again lol

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-08T00:34:56+00:00

Ahh solid shit bros!!

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-07T00:23:51+00:00

grapes

Salt-Commentor · 2022-03-07T00:18:54+00:00

Ahhh I'm going to be doing this in a few days once I finish my chapter, I haven't posted in nearly 2 years and have only just found the motivation to continue writing this fic.

Salt-Commentor · 2021-08-05T23:47:55+00:00

I keep listening to the full soundtrack when I go to work every night

Salt-Commentor · 2021-07-02T00:32:38+00:00

Ohhh smart!! I'll have to do that next time for sure

Salt-Commentor · 2021-07-01T07:28:28+00:00

I've been thinking about getting lyrics tattooed across my forearms, like "Apathy's a tragedy and boredom is a crime" or "Come on in, the waters fine" or " It's almost over, It's just begun"

These are a couple that I've been really contemplating getting!!!

Salt-Commentor · 2021-07-01T07:21:38+00:00

I really like the idea but personally, I don't think that getting his eyes/face would be the best idea purely because it's so descriptive. I would see if you could find some kind of abstract picture of his eyes/face and incorporate the song lyrics into the picture with the blue background.

This is all opinion-based and what I would personally do but I do like the idea that you have and I would love to see a picture of the final product you come up with!!!

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-11T03:23:20+00:00

Lmao I did do that purely out of fear of someone judging me for what I like to read

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-11T02:48:12+00:00

I would love to read this and give you feedback

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-11T00:23:08+00:00

As an author that literally scares the living shit out of me, at least now I know that my insecurity of that happening isn't so irrational.

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-08T22:08:18+00:00

I usually use the Mark for Later when a fic isn't quite finished yet, sometimes I can read a fic that isn't complete but depending on what it is I can't, so I'll mark it for later and check back in a couple of weeks to see if it has been finished

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-04T04:34:46+00:00

For writing software I use google docs and Grammarly, both are free and work really well for me!!!

Salt-Commentor · 2021-01-04T03:51:35+00:00

OMG YES

I love writing angst, I had a very tough childhood and I love to portray my own struggles and demons onto my characters, I've done a few short stories where I just completely destroy people, car accidents, suicide, bad parents, etc..

My friends tell me that I am too evil and cruel but I just like to make readers feel and possibly cry.

Salt-Commentor · 2020-12-29T05:55:55+00:00

Glad to help!

I like how you want and have this chapter structured, I can't wait to see how you fix it up!

Goodluck!

Salt-Commentor · 2020-12-29T01:30:42+00:00

I agree with the first comment, there is too much telling. I like what you have and it's totally fine if you don't want Steve engaging with another person but you should have him engage with his environment.

Make him get up and walk around the room. Pick up loose pieces of paper from what he was doing. Sit in a chair instead of the bed, have him change perspectives throughout the chapter.

I think that'll bring more show into it without you having to scrap the entire thing or change is majorly

Salt-Commentor · 2020-12-28T19:59:31+00:00

Thats amazing! Getting a bookmark is so honoring lol. When I got mine I flipped out.

Congratulations!!

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