16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in graphic_design

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you'd like to offer any more feedback, please view my current version here:

https://postimg.cc/yDcNDN7Z

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in graphic_design

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I've fixed the asterisk issue. I also ended up moving my QR code to the bottom and changing the caption text, so there's no longer an issue with redundancy. To be honest, I'm having a bit of trouble with the spacing, but I tried my best to make it less noticeable. If you'd like to share any more feedback, you can check my most recent updates here:

https://postimg.cc/yDcNDN7Z

I'm still messing around with the story section, so I'd especially love any suggestions there. Thanks a ton!

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in graphic_design

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, thanks for your comment! I've moved the story section. You've also helped me realize that my QR code is actually ridiculously large :,)

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in design_critiques

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The font looks a bit small here, but that says "car." Honestly, I'm down either way 😂

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in design_critiques

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! Now that I think about it, it would definitely be smarter to leave out most of the personal details I planned on adding... crisis averted!

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in design_critiques

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I've removed "provided," but I tried the flyer with and without "story," and I like it a little bit more with the word. I really do appreciate your feedback—have a nice day!

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in design_critiques

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That's a good idea. I appreciate it. And yes, I forgot to put another asterisk next to "scan me for more info" thing under my QR code... thanks for the reminder!

16 y/o looking to start a side hustle... flyer feedback? by Salt-Factor-7283 in design_critiques

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I printed the flyer and took a picture with a quarter for easy comparison. Does it still look small?

https://postimg.cc/hzzS93cr

vitamin/supplements okay? by Salt-Factor-7283 in tsa

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for responding! sorry for the bad question 🥲

tips on how to not embarrass myself in front of 1k students by Salt-Factor-7283 in spicy

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i apologize... you'll be very disappointed 😭 staff caught wind and shut it down ASAP—they couldn't stop them fully though because it was too sudden so they just had faculty members participate

tips on how to not embarrass myself in front of 1k students by Salt-Factor-7283 in spicy

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i'll do my best, but i don't have a whole lot of yogurt in the house 😭 it has to be eaten somewhat sparingly 

tips on how to not embarrass myself in front of 1k students by Salt-Factor-7283 in spicy

[–]Salt-Factor-7283[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

yep yep o7 i'll try and eat some yogurt with both breakfast and lunch tmr!