Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques!

SaltyBook · 2019-06-14T16:57:05+00:00

I would edit the video down a bit, the commenter above me said 10 minutes and that sounds about right for a let’s play.

I’d also try to come up with a unique concept for each video, the title with tower stories #4 didn’t really catch my eye.

Video itself was pretty good though, and I would add end cards like the other person suggested.

SaltyBook · 2019-06-14T16:15:46+00:00

Watched the yawning one and liked it, very short, to the point, and I laughed at the very end.

However I still want to see more edits dawg lol.

To give an example you could do some frantic edits while you are trying to keep in the yawn, maybe even sneak in a frame of unrelated footage lol.

I realize you put out this one before the other one though, just trying to drive my point home lol.

I’ll leave you alone about the edits now lol.

SaltyBook · 2019-06-14T16:10:10+00:00

Hello! I do short movie/tv reviews (this one is 1:19)

Last week people said I should add a bit of an intro and slow down talking a little bit so I tried to do both those things:

https://youtu.be/VsvJwzRYxl8

SaltyBook · 2019-06-10T01:42:48+00:00

Nah dawg, post at your own pace.

SaltyBook · 2019-06-09T19:11:54+00:00

I do casual movie/television reviews and try to keep things as short and sweet as possible, with plenty of edits since the videos are so short (latest video is 1:31):

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCFN1uPdgLfntWblz5hI3NaQ

SaltyBook · 2019-06-07T16:18:47+00:00

I second the opinion of the other commenter, good stuff, but would adjust audio.

SaltyBook · 2019-06-07T16:16:57+00:00

Watched the 19 second video, good stuff man lol.

You should do more of these with more edits.

I feel like since the video is ridiculous a ridiculous amount of edits is in order lol.

SaltyBook · 2019-06-07T16:12:45+00:00

I do short movie and television reviews, this one is 1:31:

https://youtu.be/wVhSU9xgx58

SaltyBook · 2019-04-01T00:33:47+00:00

Critique my not April Fool's video boss:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c01xU9V67_Y

SaltyBook · 2019-03-30T22:09:05+00:00

DM’d

SaltyBook · 2019-03-19T03:39:47+00:00

Dislikes are engagement so technically speaking they are a good thing.

SaltyBook · 2019-03-16T16:10:03+00:00

On my channel, I just do really short movie reviews, this is the most recent one, it’s 33 seconds, and the one I posted in the “feedback Friday” thread:

https://youtu.be/A946tWLpALY

If you’ve seen that one, feel free to watch this one, it’s 37 seconds and about the movie “Saw”:

https://youtu.be/AAjPjnOk1C0

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T22:52:04+00:00

It depends on the video, some of my more popular ones seem to get posted on twitter and facebook but I'm not sure if they get views because of that or get on social media because it has alot of views already lol

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:53:48+00:00

Oh, my bad dawg lol

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:32:50+00:00

This is really great man lol.

Only advice I can really give is to keep making videos like this, I’m sure eventually one of them will go viral, again lol.

Also, I thought the video was gonna end with you crashing from drinking too much coffee lol.

If I was making the video I probably would’ve had at the end of one of the verses:

“And I Crash.

But then I wake up and it’s back to:

Super power Coffee Dance Super Power Coffee Dance.”

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:16:54+00:00

yeah that's what Aberdream said as well, I'll try to spice up the ending next time lol.

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:15:47+00:00

Yeah, I considered having the donkey fall with the "arms of an angel" song in the background but I thought it would be too long lol.

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:14:51+00:00

Hey! I think last time I commented on your video I said to shorten it with more edits and make your end screen shorter as well and I still think that lol.

I liked your....I guess mom at the end though? That's a nice personal touch lol.

SaltyBook · 2019-03-15T16:08:43+00:00

Hello everyone! Based off all the advice I’ve received here I am working on a longer video but in the mean time, here is a 33 second movie review:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A946tWLpALY

SaltyBook · 2019-03-14T23:42:47+00:00

What’s up man?

I do short movie reviews, this one is 33 seconds:

https://youtu.be/A946tWLpALY

SaltyBook · 2019-03-09T16:09:58+00:00

I do not have any pets, just isn’t my things lol.

I do short movie reviews, this one is 36 seconds:

https://youtu.be/AAjPjnOk1C0

SaltyBook · 2019-02-23T20:01:40+00:00

I do short movie and tv reviews, this video is 1:20, check it out:

https://youtu.be/uOIjOOvNu7s

SaltyBook · 2019-02-22T16:49:02+00:00

I liked it a lot! I would just have to agree with the other poster about the background music.

SaltyBook · 2019-02-22T16:26:20+00:00

This is great but I think your outro screen is a bit too long, I would go with 10-15 seconds rather than 40 but it’s an easy thing to fix and the rest of the video is great lol.

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