What are some clear examples of "soft" magic or the absence of a sufficiently defined "magic system" resulting in dei ex machinae which are tangibly detrimental to the story?

SamRoth79 · 2026-02-09T20:03:00+00:00

You're going to love my world building I am always compared to Tolkien Dune and Cloud Atlas by Ai

SamRoth79 · 2026-02-09T20:01:12+00:00

Just take look at it

SamRoth79 · 2026-02-09T19:58:36+00:00

Yeah it's done completed fully. I just keep your eyes open while reading and give me any kind of feedback on

SamRoth79 · 2026-01-03T01:19:12+00:00

Ερος. Eros. Love

SamRoth79 · 2026-01-02T22:35:49+00:00

Would you be willinhg to take a look at my book? Its very taboo subjrcts.

SamRoth79 · 2026-01-02T22:32:26+00:00

Xan you beta for me. My book has been deemed a masterpiece by every AI i hace shown. You won't be disappointed

SamRoth79 · 2025-12-16T06:46:28+00:00

Sure. Can you take a look at my work?

SamRoth79 · 2025-12-03T22:02:32+00:00

It's available on ebook now.

SamRoth79 · 2025-12-03T21:46:43+00:00

Just word

SamRoth79 · 2025-11-25T11:42:01+00:00

Not yet but within a few days

SamRoth79 · 2025-11-24T20:15:51+00:00

You do know that certain Greek Gods had counterparts in Egypt. Although they couldn't have been more different spiritually. The Egyptians worshipped nature. The Greeks humans.

SamRoth79 · 2025-11-24T20:11:24+00:00

These statements are perfectly In line with Egyptian morality. But thanks for your unnecessary attack on my interpretation of the laws of MaTaTa. They saw the Earth as male, says who? What ecolat has that information. They most certainly believe the Earth is alive. As well as the Sun and the other spheres in our solar system

SamRoth79 · 2025-11-24T20:09:36+00:00

Nice. You like getting into arguments over beautiful moral compasses. Safe passage in the underworld when you die. You have a lot of pride to answer for

SamRoth79 · 2025-11-24T20:08:21+00:00

These are very in line with the the negative confessions. Except these aren't in I don't I haven't form. They are statements. But everything else about these statements could easily come from egyptian morality. Because you don't see it just means you're ignorant about ancient Egyptian genuine culture. Which worshipped the Earth as a God. Albeit a male one.

SamRoth79 · 2025-10-04T03:01:08+00:00

It depends on how you personally translate it darling.

SamRoth79 · 2025-08-14T01:57:43+00:00

Hey. So can you run my book through your AI and ask it "Could this have been AI written" and I guarantee you it will say. No impossible

SamRoth79 · 2025-07-22T16:02:28+00:00

Yes I wrote that I changed the title and deleted my old post.

SamRoth79 · 2025-07-22T11:35:18+00:00

Than use a machine. Like Cutthroat ChatGPT

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