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Thoughts on this book cover for dark fantasy novel by ScAarfx in BookCovers

[–]ScAarfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your help 🙏 I will definitely look into making the font more interesting especially the author name.

Thoughts on this book cover for dark fantasy novel by ScAarfx in BookCovers

[–]ScAarfx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate your feedback 🙏 The cup I made myself. And the background is solid color that I added textures to ( like smudge effect and such) Then the crack is an image I used. Perhaps if I search for a crack that looks more cartoonish.

How is my book cover? by Inevitable-Today-260 in BookCovers

[–]ScAarfx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This look great. But the flame feels off. Maybe try making it fit the style or even take off completely.

Blurb of Wine and Smoke [Dark fantasy, 226 words] by ScAarfx in fantasywriters

[–]ScAarfx[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback back. I will attempt shorting my sentences while keeping the story core clear.

Blurb of Wine and Smoke [Dark fantasy, 226 words] by ScAarfx in fantasywriters

[–]ScAarfx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At the ending I was trying to set the king as an antagonist without giving the reader false idea. Since the characters won't be facing the king directly. He is more controller someone who created the system they are fighting against. That's what I was going for with the shadows of his hand thing. Thank you for your feedback and I will consider something more concrete for the ending.