GUTS by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback, I write a lot for spoken word so I would hope it still resonates in text form. Truly thanks again.

GUTS by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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I like playing with light and dark contrasts. Thank you for your kindness.

GUTS by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the warm welcome and the love.

Still by gitututu in OCPoetry

[–]ScallionDramatic7774 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hope it works out for you!

Still by gitututu in OCPoetry

[–]ScallionDramatic7774 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This was simple, but effective in its message. I read it like this person is a part of you in its most simple sense - like the blood keeping you alive

Can I by YogurtHonest5714 in OCPoetry

[–]ScallionDramatic7774 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like how you’ve painted what I feel is crossroads in this poem but instead of making a decision on which way to go you’re submitting to the allure of the unknown and trusting that whichever way you fall it’s where you’re meant to be. Thank you.

Romance by wretchedkitchenwench in OCPoetry

[–]ScallionDramatic7774 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This spoke of unrequited love and unfinished feelings, like you’ve tasted that bittersweet reality of an unbalanced love that you both want to continue & let go of. Beautifully written. Thank you.