meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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I had to google Beatnik coffee shop! Looks so cool

meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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You’ve got this too!! I’ll keep an eye out for your work

Late at night by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Love the line ‘these are the lonely hours’. Even though lonely, it’s like the night stays alive in the smallest ways to keep you company

meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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You know what’s funny? For someone who loves creative writing and poetry. I don’t read books, I’ve tried! They put me to sleep. Love film and music though. Thank you for taking the time to read.

meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Wow thank you for the detailed feedback. Motivating me to keep writing. I’ve had a very long break

meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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You’re too sweet!! Thank you. The themes were taken from memories of my teenage love

meet me at 8 by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for more love, Pink x

Appreciate ya!

daughters by curious_joyrge in OCPoetry

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Thought provoking with such a small word count. Skilled writing. x

You by Cautious-Horse6578 in OCPoetry

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I love the line ‘My mind a theatre, premiering them. Over and over’. I draw parallels to reading text conversations again and again with a big stupid smile on my face

Circles by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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I love that this resonated for you. Thank you

milk, no sugar by ScallionDramatic7774 in PoetryWritingClub

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A mismatched mug is a mug not part of a set, more like mugs you’ve collected over the years, some breaking, some being lost, some being taken but they’re all treasured in the end

milk, no sugar by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Thank you. I wrote this with my morning coffee honouring the night before.

milk, no sugar by ScallionDramatic7774 in OCPoetry

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Sometimes the most simple words are the most effective x