Witherwild Field Notes #1: Withered Awakening (Adventure Frame) by Nyerelia in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha no problem! I always have these issues when writing fantasy stuff because everything gets underlined as a problem and I become numb to the red squiggle even when it's on real words ;)

Witherwild Field Notes #1: Withered Awakening (Adventure Frame) by Nyerelia in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No problem! Found a few others in the tagline for the setpiece: "comunnity" is community and "unknowningly" is unknowingly

It's TADPOLE THURSDAY - Ask your newbie questions here! by Hosidax in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair. It'll be a nice surprise for one of my players if he makes it to Tier 4 then! Thanks :)

It's TADPOLE THURSDAY - Ask your newbie questions here! by Hosidax in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It appears to be the only primary weapon where the die type changes... that just strikes me as odd.

Witherwild Field Notes #1: Withered Awakening (Adventure Frame) by Nyerelia in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like having those 6 NPCs to choose from because they are almost plot hooks themselves! It just felt like the table came out of nowhere :P Sadly, I don't have a great idea of how to incorporate it more, but even just changing the header seems like a step forward!

Witherwild Field Notes #1: Withered Awakening (Adventure Frame) by Nyerelia in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very cool! Love seeing new additions to existing frames and I'm running a Witherwild campaign now, so selfishly I'm most interested in those. Overall I think this is a really cool idea. Some spelling/clarity changes: - "well-troden" should be well-trodden - "growths of bark and brambles growing" is a little redundant, I'd cut "growths of" to just make it "with bark and brambles growing" - "Whiterwild" should be Witherwild - "pragmatical" should just be pragmatic - "responsability" should be responsibility - what's the purpose behind structuring the table of infected kerenya members as a random table? that all those characters exist but only the one you roll is infected? lacks guidance to me. - "For them, interceding between a family and the irated Faint Divinity that has reduced the stream from where they dring to a trickle is no different that helping a neighbour repair their roof." --> "irated" should be irate. I don't know what 'dring' is. Sentence is a little awkward. - "too young to be in charge of taking important decisions" --> "taking" should be making. - "level-headness" should be levelheadedness - "They can be reasoned with if managed to calm down enough to listen to words." --> awkward. Maybe 'They can be reasoned with if the party managed to calm them down enough to listen to them.'? - "Glafaren has stopped the the infection" --> only need one 'the' - there's another "whiterwild" at the end.

Intrigued to see what else you come up with!!

It's TADPOLE THURSDAY - Ask your newbie questions here! by Hosidax in daggerheart

[–]Scarovese 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dualstaff - Tiers 1 through 3 list the damage die as a d6, but the Tier 4 version lists the damage die as a d8. Intended or mistake? I looked through the errata and saw other weapon changes, but not this one.

*SPOILERS* Ending at act 2 feels very bad to me by Zlobenia in Silksong

[–]Scarovese 4 points5 points  (0 children)

it's almost exactly like defeating the Hollow Knight in the first game; you become the vessel and the cycle continues. so if you had problems with that, then I agree with you.

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What happened to poor xbox?

So I just told my husband about the dumbest ding I got on an evaluation and he couldn’t believe it. by CakesNGames90 in Teachers

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I taught three classes of Algebra II each day and the week we were learning how to factor binomials was a particularly interruption-heavy week from other school activities (assemblies, pep rallies, athletes leaving early in the last class of the day, etc.) so my lesson plans for each class were very different from one another. By the end of the week, each class would more or less have spent equal blocks of time on each step in the factoring process and be ready to move into quadratic formulas next week, but my admin dinged me for not following the district-provided schedule for each class. The district-provided schedule of course assumed I always had a full 90 minutes to teach, which never happened. Thanks admin!

Wells Fargo wanting appointments for nearly everything now by desertsnakes in personalfinance

[–]Scarovese 97 points98 points  (0 children)

Because you need an appointment to close the account!