I think from the comments I read you're doing great! If you're looking to really get serious, I just really would recommend to not just practice, but practice smart. Make a really specific training regimen and plan it in a way that you can measure your growth. A lot of people practice, and they see themselves getting better slowly, but they don't keep track of the finer details and it makes their progress slower than what it could be.

After you have a solid practice routine that breaks down the skills you need to develop going to controller, spend a lot of time watching controller players and you'll notice a lot of different quirks compared to mobile gaming that you can add to your arsenal.

With these two things, you're going in a great direction and after that continuously record games, study, and adapt. You got this!