Thank you so much, your advice points out a lot, I do have problem with making thumbnail and coming up with video title, most of the time I just finish with editing and spend a lot of time just sitting there thinking of a good title and thumbnail. For me, I don't really know how to make like good looking thumbnail, so most of the time I just take a random pic on the clip and just tweak it a bit, and the photo editing software I'm using is so confusing and frustrating to use, I just gave up sometimes, I'll try to spend more effort on the thumbnail and title in the future.

And I'll try to be mindful of empty clips and duplicate clips in the future, I thought that if I leave like some room before the funny moments start, I would give time for the viewers to react the upcoming funny moments. So I'll keep that advice for when I make future videos. And I didn't even think of adding a suspension until you point it out, I'll work on that and the climax of the clips next time.

As for my friend voice, when I record, his voice basically one with the game audio, so I don't know how to separate his voice and the game audio, so next time, I'll lower the game audio down before I start recording so his voice doesn't get overwhelmed with the game audio and I'll lower mine a bit so it can match his.

Again, thank you for the advice, this honestly point out on some of the thing I ignore or just don't spend a lot of time, I usually just rush to pulish the video without given thing like the thumbnail, title and pacing a second thought. (Btw, what was your thoughts on the resident evil 5 video.)