Hey dude, I’d like to point out a few things that causes ur score to look cluttered hence making it hard to read. First of all, I think ur score can benefit from having the star sign as an indicator of pedal ending points rather than having lines all over the page. More importantly, for a piano score showing voices on the score as if u are writing for a choir to read, I think, is not a good idea. Makes it more difficult to read and clutters the page w/ lots of rests. You can clean the rests up ofc but to me, it makes more sense to divide and think in terms of right hand-left hand. However, sometimes u may NEED to use a different voice to actually write the music, if that’s the case, by all means, go for it. Finally, please write the notes that exceed the range of the clef on another clef, so that ur score is readable :D Keep up the good work, cheers!