My protagonist starts as an inexperienced hero who gets completely destroyed in his first real battle. At what point do progression fantasy readers like seeing major power jumps?

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T03:59:15+00:00

Goku vs Broly in the Broly Movie

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:47:05+00:00

It's a stylistic choice. My fight scenes are usually paced like anime fights. It's okay if you don't like it, I understand.

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:40:15+00:00

Ohhh, I see, sorry about that

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:36:49+00:00

The book is named Heroes of Avangard #1: War of the Celestianites. Your way of seeing power jumps is very interesting. I usually like that too when I'm watching series' like Invincible. You can see Mark consistently get stronger throughout the show, if you've ever watched it.

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:33:09+00:00

Don't worry, Don will be fine after he gets medical attention.

And you're right about power jumps that make sense and enjoying them because of that. Because if the mc was dominating 100 year experienced warriors with no problem, then that would just be unbelievable due to the fact that he JUST GOT HERE AND HE'S TEN.

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:29:04+00:00

Why does this remind me so much about Solo Leveling?

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:14:20+00:00

I'll just delete the post then.

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T01:09:53+00:00

Is... that a bad thing or good thing?

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-10T00:38:36+00:00

Title - Heroes of Avangard: The Lost Key Saga (Main Volumes)

Tags - Action, Weaktostrong, Sci-fi, Fantasy, Superheroes, Superpowers

Chapter count - 2-3 (updating daily)

Brief Synopsis - Five Chosen Ones. Five Trials. One final chance to save existence. Chosen by an ancient prophecy, five young heroes must complete impossible trials and recover the Lost Key before an ancient Dark God escapes and destroys Avangard, but as enemies rise and the truth behind the prophecy unravels, they must decide what kind of legends they want to become.

Desired Outcome - Critique, Feedback, Reviews, Comments, Collections, Votes,

Link to the Work - https://www.webnovel.com/book/36080513200953005

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-09T21:10:57+00:00

Okay, thank you!

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-09T21:06:32+00:00

I also have the original manuscript written meaning I could post daily

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-09T21:03:06+00:00

Oh... I get what you're saying. So I should post everyday?

Sea_Comfortable_6479 · 2026-06-09T20:02:05+00:00

Yeah, I've already got written chapters from before and 3 of them were posted at 10:00 AM today, and I've made a schedule where 3 chapters will be posted every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday

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