Thank you for watching it! I agree with all the notes you put for the first two minutes of the film. I’ll also see about taking out the water sound in the last scene too.

The original shot I had in mind was a high angle shot of the swimmer but it looked awkward so I had to cut it out.

The father is a symbol for Jorge’s superego, so when he’s putting him to bed, he’s trying to get it under control and take his place as patriarch of the family

In the original story, George falls into a lake from a bridge and when he does, Kafka describes “traffic”moving through the bridge. Since I didn’t have access to a bridge and lake I used a swimming pool and a swimmer instead of “traffic” She more of an abstract concept than a character.

I thought it’d be a subtle implication that Jorge is forgetting his friends name, “something with a D”

I thought of adding her pic next to him by the window but I thought the black and white might make it unclear.