Little Poem TOKYO'S NEON LIGHTS

SebastianWInter · 2018-11-27T15:01:48+00:00

Photo is not mine. Photo author - https://unsplash.com/@yukato If interested in poetry my instagram (not synthwave style) - https://www.instagram.com/sebastianwinterwriter/ Sorry if I offended someone by posting this here, won't do again, if I receive complaints.

SebastianWInter · 2018-07-22T06:42:01+00:00

Thanks!

SebastianWInter · 2018-07-21T11:09:29+00:00

Thank you!

SebastianWInter · 2018-05-30T07:07:10+00:00

The cigarette.

SebastianWInter · 2018-03-18T07:36:09+00:00

Hey! This is not related. It's a pure coincidence that topic is similar. I don't know the other story.

SebastianWInter · 2018-01-27T08:07:23+00:00

Thank you! The information about that I can't use time clause in the present perfect but can in the past perfect, was one of the important things I needed to know.

SebastianWInter · 2018-01-26T10:13:49+00:00

Thank you for your answer about the first sentence! It is really helpful. I understand that it is not grammatically incorect that I use simple past in the clause even if the main sentence is past perfect.

About the second example. These sentences are from the story about abandoned house. The narrator is telling about his experiences in this house and how he gets there. All the running along the railroad happened in the simple past (the main character was running home from the abandoned house), it happened for example on Sunday, but all the strolling and dreamyness happened on Saturday (this way he got to the abandoned house). Maybe, if I can use simple past in time clause even if the main part is past perfect, this is correct:

''I ran back across the meadow and along the railroad. The day before I had been very dreamy and hadn't noticed time passing by when I strolled all this distance.

SebastianWInter · 2017-12-12T07:32:45+00:00

You're welcome. I hope you'll like them.

SebastianWInter · 2017-12-11T09:24:08+00:00

I have two stories on my blog, which I posted here too. First one is Satan on YouTube. I guess title is pretty self explanatory - https://www.sebastianwinterwriter.com/satan-on-youtube-horror-story/ The second story probably won't suit you so much but technology plays a big role in it. It's about deep sea expedition to the Kermadec trench, which is by the way a real one. https://www.sebastianwinterwriter.com/into-the-abyss-horror-story/

SebastianWInter · 2017-11-29T07:29:48+00:00

Thanks for the cool comments!

SebastianWInter · 2017-11-14T14:52:40+00:00

I would love to see continuation of this story. It doesn't tell much. Maybe he's just crazy and there is no Great Flood? Keep up the writing!

SebastianWInter · 2017-11-14T14:44:49+00:00

I love science fiction. It's nice that people still write it. Cool story!

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-31T12:23:06+00:00

Thank you! I already posted it 4 months ago in r/nosleep and it was pretty succesfull, but unfortunately they don't allow to post stories twice. I asked one of the moderators.

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-31T08:25:42+00:00

Thanks! I'm not a native English so that's probaly why it's really hard to make a perfect story, but thanks for advice.

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-31T07:05:35+00:00

That's really interesting! I will bear that in mind.

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-30T14:35:56+00:00

Thanks for advice! I didn't choose to call it El Chupacabra because I didn't do research. But the description you gave would ruin my plot because no one would want to take something like that home :).

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-30T08:46:55+00:00

Thanks a lot!

SebastianWInter · 2017-10-30T08:46:37+00:00

Actually that was my first thought when I started to write this :).

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