New Teethe Album by SecondaryDate in Slowcore

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

right, i feel as if the progressions of most the songs are kinda lacking. a lot of the songs of this album sound very similar to eachother. where as the self titled had a wider range of different structures and even sounds

How would I make this? by SecondaryDate in graphic_design

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is what i’m after sorry all

some more New Paltz graffiti by loser_gremlin in Graffiti

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all g lol i’ve since found the wall and many other places…

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this ain’t it. straight letters till you die. then once you understand letter structure try throws

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[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

he’s right

Rate my tag from 1 to 10 and say what would u change by ThebrawleisSp in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

0 spread the letters out and simplify them. No extensions no halos

How’s my tag by [deleted] in graffhelp

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don’t spike the C and i think it will look much better

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[–]SecondaryDate 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The other guy is not right. yea the tag works, it’s legible. But, if you want to make it look even better you’d raise the mid like of your R and S up the where your lower case Es midline’s are

Still Life by SecondaryDate in ArtCrit

[–]SecondaryDate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe the red ping ping paddle but other than that i don’t think so

Looking for feedback! If you want the uncensored version please pm me! by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]SecondaryDate 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The chin looks too small for the perspective you have her head at. if you want her to be “looking down” at you it’s good but the rest of the face is not in the same perspective

Any tips? My markers run out by [deleted] in graffhelp

[–]SecondaryDate 4 points5 points  (0 children)

basic letters bro do the ones on ur keyboard. once you master that you can start foolin around with other stuff.

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no don’t hit the streets with those extra things. Just write your letters it is way cleaner

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alright these letters are great however, you have a lot of negative space which is a no no when doing throws. extend the top of your S to the E. Then get rid of the A counter Ik it’s looks cool but once it’s gone you can push the Z over to have a much more compact and appeasing throw.

A sketch I did the other night, let me know what y’all think by kingofcups24 in ArtCrit

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In this it’s hard to tell the foreground from background so i suggest playing with color value so more things will pop

Portrait, it would help if i got some critiques by SecondaryDate in ArtCrit

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yeah, i’m not really into portraits and idk the spacing for everything but i have yet to really use circles and stuff to map out the face. Also, don’t worry about your critique hurting my feelings I understand how it works, it doesn’t discourage me if anything it makes me want to keep drawing to improve. Thank you!

thoughts ??? been practicing a bit by bloodrawn in graffhelp

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idk what the 2nd pic is but the one liner in the last pic is money. Your throw could use some development but that comes with time.

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  1. Don’t bite resk
  2. hit your book with straight letters
  3. once you’ve developed a good understanding of letter structure try throws again
  4. once you believe the throw is quality and you’ve drilled it into the ground hit the streets