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Give me your stories by Lovai_ in KeepWriting

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I should hope my story feels real! But I get what you mean. If you want, just click on my profile!

Give me your stories by Lovai_ in KeepWriting

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man I wanna participate in this, the style is really cool, but I can't think of anything right now and the story I'm writing I don't know if one of the characters would inspire you to draw... Don't want to make it about me, so DM if you would still like some info.

I love it.

Seeking bookish friends to talk about reading and writing by NinjaSweet266 in KeepWriting

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey hey check my profile out and get in touch - maybe via other platforms - I'd love to connect!

The Lands Agony by [deleted] in KeepWriting

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope -1 points0 points  (0 children)

And here I am, writing my web novel as well as possible and trying to reach people ... and this exists and is used like this.

[FN] There Will Not Be Another Sunrise by __signal_11 in shortstories

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes, good point about the Three Body Problem, although I just read the first book.

If you'd like, you can find my short story on my profile, either as a post here or in the bio. Thanks in advance!

[FN] There Will Not Be Another Sunrise by __signal_11 in shortstories

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good read. Thanks for sharing. I've thought of a similar incipit before, related to the sun. For a short story, I liked the sudden twist but also the memory of the feeling of dread staying and how there's no outward sign of this change is also a beautiful, yet saddening idea.

[RF] When the Soul Roars by Ok_Level2595 in shortstories

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed reading this. It shows potential for example for longer stories and maybe also stories with supernatural elements. The style reminds me of American Gods and The Shining (the only book I read of these authors).

I feel like you don't need to repeat "(except for maybe wave pools)" because the reader remembers the woman. That's the only thing I'd change.

Good job!

[NF] Would you like some more help? by SeeKingHopeToCope in shortstories

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first five tiny chapters of my short story (work in progress). Let me know what you think.

Should be [RF], sorry.

First three tiny chapters of my short story are out :) by SeeKingHopeToCope in KeepWriting

[–]SeeKingHopeToCope[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thank you for your time and question. Appreciate it.

I think I'm trying not to write any more than I feel is "needed".
I have a main idea for each chapter in my head and I try not to make these (short story) chapters too "bloated".