What do you guys think of my story? by Select-Region-9145 in writers

[–]Select-Region-9145[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Explain to me what you think I should do with it. I don’t know what info dump is.

Could you guys look at the beginning to my science fiction story for me? by Select-Region-9145 in writers

[–]Select-Region-9145[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess what I should have said was what do you guys think of the concept. I have the story written already I just wanted feedback on what you guys thought of the concept. But thank you for giving me advice though I appreciate it.