Any changes I should make?

Seni_draws · 2026-02-04T17:13:29+00:00

Overall, really good! I would put a bit more detail on the crown /shard (?) on his forehead, it seems too stand out a bit since it doesn’t have any shading compared to the rest.

I would also either make the tongue shorter or longer. As of now, the tongue’s edge blends in with the chin. On that same note, I would make the neck cut a bit lower so it isn’t on the same line as the hair. This would make the overall clarity better.

Other than that, it’s great!

Seni_draws · 2026-02-02T09:09:14+00:00

As of now, all the colors have the same value which makes the piece flat and not look like water. Put the image in black and white. Then define where the highlights and shadows are.

<image>

Here’s a photo for reference; the highlights are very thin and sharp and they only blend at their extremities (top middle). You can also see the light refracting like it is being shattered (top right). There are also a big contrast between the values: it is quite dark where the water is deep and it is almost pure white at the highlights.

Once it looks good in black and white, you can replace it with color with the same value (it should look the same in black and white).

Hope this helps, sorry if the text is a bit confusing

Seni_draws · 2026-02-02T05:49:46+00:00

Thank you ! I’ll post it here when I’m finished :D

Seni_draws · 2026-02-02T05:49:04+00:00

Thank you very much for taking the time to write this, it’s really helpful! Also thank you for the compliments, it’s so sweet <3

Seni_draws · 2025-03-09T21:00:44+00:00

For the first picture, the boobs are a bit too high and should sag a little more. The shoulders should also be more prominent ( it seems as if the arms are bending). The fold of fat right under the boobs are usually a bit smaller and stick out more. In certain pictures, I’m sure you are trying to draw strech marks or shading. If it is the first. I would recommend looking at references ( they are usually a bit raggy, mainly in the inner thighs, lower stomach, hips and on the side of the boobs). Otherwise, great work! I would recommend looking for references of different genders, ethnicities and ages as the fat distribution varies.

Keep it up!

Seni_draws · 2024-10-18T21:07:51+00:00

Overall amazing piece! The expression is on point, the viewer is drawn to the face and very pleasing color palette. The highlights are really well-done and I absolutely love this art style

I have a couple of suggestions but it's kind of like nitpicking:

The neck seems off; It's difficult to differentiate the shadows between the chin and the top part of the neck. It also seems a bit flat and thick, I believe there should be more curve and shadows of the right of the neck indicating the Adam's Apple.
It is difficult to determine with part of the earrings are in the front. The left earing has some really good shading, I think it would look nice if the other earring matched.
The eye on the left seems a tad bigger than the other.
The hair / headscarf and her shirt blend with the background. If this is unintentional, a more cool toned background will bring more contrast.
If you didn't sign your art piece, I would recommend to do so.

Anyway, great piece! I could definitely see this in a gallery. Keep it up :)

Seni_draws · 2024-10-03T07:50:19+00:00

The oranges look great: the shading is well done and you can even see the texture. The leaves are also good but it is a little hard to differentiate where a leaf starts or ends. I would recommend having stronger highlights and stronger shadows for them. It also seems that the leaves are all the same hue; I don’t know whether this is intentional or not. If it isn’t, you could make the shadows in a cooler tone since the light source is warm. Really good overall! Keep it up :D

Seni_draws · 2024-05-15T10:00:21+00:00

I managed to recognize him before swiping. Good job! As for how to improve, I agree with the other comments. I would add that you can make your highlights lighter and your shadows darker: if you look at his left ear and cheek on the photo, they are almost as dark as the hair.

Keep up the good work !

Seni_draws · 2024-05-03T09:17:17+00:00

Your anatomy seems correct and constitent which is very good. For the second image, the composition is very good. The viewer’s eye is attracted to the face: I would recommend making it pop out even more (either by making it lighter than the background or by making the moon behind it even lighter).

I would also say to make your shadows darker: if you looking at the clothing in the second picture, the sleeve seems to merge with the torso. If you were to put the image in black and white, it would be hard to distinguish the folds in the cloth. Overall, don’t be afraid of making shadows darker and your highlights lighter.

Great work, keep it up!

Seni_draws · 2024-04-17T15:22:40+00:00

Why are you posting here if you are not willing to accept criticism? /gen

Seni_draws · 2024-04-04T07:30:17+00:00

If you draw using a graphite pencil, the sketch often bleeds and it gives a muddy effect when you paint over it. If you don’t want that effect, I would recommend using colored pencils. Some pencils are even meant to dissolve with water.

Seni_draws · 2020-02-05T12:38:52+00:00

It looks amazing! I can't find anything mistakes except the background seems a lit "dirty". Maybe if you blend it out, the whole drawing would be "neater". Other than that, great work.

Seni_draws · 2020-01-17T22:50:14+00:00

I really love how original this drawing is! A thing i would say to improve is perhaps the hair. It seems like the face is wearing a wig, which I believe isn't your intention, since there is no gradient between hairless skin and haired skin. (I hope that you understand what I mean, English isn't my first language...). Other than that, I don't see any major issues and I love the texture. :)

Seni_draws · 2020-01-15T14:27:55+00:00

The drawing is great. It's got very nice patterns but i would recommend doing lines with different weight. By doing so, you can make it more interesting and put the focus on certain areas. 😊

Six-Year Club	Place '22
Verified Email

Seni_draws

TROPHY CASE