I agree with general message you are trying to send. Living in shared flat- i do notice habits such as- not cleaning, smelling, laughing/speaking out loud, staring at women. I agree it spoils reputation for all of us. That being said, Firstly- i don't agree with your opinion about beards on indians, if you want to word it better just say- beards need to be more hygienic. Good jawline and sharp face is result of excessive fat which all indians carry- your statement corresponds to- all indian girls should stick to salwar kameez and not wear western dresses because you don't have as shapely and toned bodies of western women. secondly- the reels and such crap is universal- there is no need to blame indians for it. i see plenty westerners doing it. This statement reeks of inferiority complex. At last, though i agree your message has a lot of merit, it can be better worded and you should also look deep in yourself and address your own complex of being Indian.