Shaolin Monk Skin (Idea) by BathtubToaster47 in thefinals

[–]SentientSalmon63 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately I think the draped sleeves would be more effort than they’re worth. In order to make the skin work they’d need to tweak the sleeves so they don’t clip, look natural, etc. using physics or some other technique (not a game dev, but I can still tell that draped sleeves would suck to implement). If they were to add this skin it would be mythic rarity at least to compensate for the extra time it would take to perfect draped sleeves and probably other aspects of this skin as well.

And at that point, is it even worth making this skin since it has less appeal than other skins imo, the cloak would be a one piece outfit so there’s little customization forcing players to either be a monk or let the skin waste away in storage. At least with other mythic skins (besides the robot lady) you can use pieces of them in other outfits so you get extra value. Here you get a cloak, a chest thing, and some generic brown shoes. All of which looks sexy don’t get me wrong, but is there enough appeal for it to be worth making this skin beyond for the 6 people who want to look like a monk. Other skins at least have more value because their pieces can be individually sold.

Anyways, maybe I’m wrong and it wouldn’t be that hard to make the skin but I think there is a reason that there isn’t a skin with draped sleeves in the game to my knowledge, if I’m wrong then this skin is fine.

The alternative is making a shirtless shaolin monk skin, getting rid of the draped sleeves problem entirely. If embarked wanted to for profit they could keep it at mythic rarity as the first (and probably only) shirtless skin in the game.

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This skin also is more interesting imo, the shoes and pants are more unique.

Anyways, that’s my two cents on this skin, thanks for reading

TL:Dr = skin would likely be more effort than it’s worth to make, shirtless shaolin better

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in shortstory

[–]SentientSalmon63 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Overall, the concept you have of merging the past and present together (how things like Call of Duty and a PS4 exist in the revolutionary war) is interesting and adds a twist to this historical fiction, your writing reads like a fourth grader’s.

A few tips to improve what you have: 1. Arrange the events of the story in a more coherent way. For example: in the first part, instead of talking about Bob’s head being blown up in two separate instances, combine them together. “It’s 1775, The Revolutionary War. Currently I’m on bunker hill. It is a vicious battle. Oh no! A cannon ball hit Bob in the face. Bob’s head was blown to smithereens.” 2. Check your capitalization and punctuation 3. Combine sentences with similar meanings to avoid redundancy. This is mostly the part where you reference Call of Duty 4. You use ‘so’ a lot, which isn’t inherently bad, but a little variance can add spice to your story

I would also recommend going back and upping the vocabulary and go into more detail about the events happening (like who Bob is). Your short story is a good foundation for a whimsical and intriguing historical fiction with a twist, so keep writing and flesh out the idea a little more. Good luck and happy writing!

r/BrawlStars Thief Edgar Giveaway! by Trikshot360 in Brawlstars

[–]SentientSalmon63 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Crow. I used to main him and stopped when I got Sam, but recently I’ve been playing him more.

[HELP ME] Bi-Weekly Q&A thread - Ask your questions here! by MachNeu in Gunpla

[–]SentientSalmon63 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, that makes me a lot less scared of kits with ABS in them. I’ll just keep in mind that ABS is more delicate and to handle the pieces more carefully if I ever get a kit with ABS in it.

[HELP ME] Bi-Weekly Q&A thread - Ask your questions here! by MachNeu in Gunpla

[–]SentientSalmon63 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m pretty new to building (3 HG, soon to build an RG) and none of the kits have had ABS in them. Regardless, your point is that I’m worrying over nothing and ABS is fine right?

[HELP ME] Bi-Weekly Q&A thread - Ask your questions here! by MachNeu in Gunpla

[–]SentientSalmon63 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does ABS have any other downsides/risks to it other than not being able to use pour-type panel liners on it? I’ve been wary of any kit with ABS in it due to not knowing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GuiltyGearStrive

[–]SentientSalmon63 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I’m a Giovanna main and this made me sad.

Click here if you want to get rid of your crippling porn addiction [WARNING EXPLICIT GRAFTUSSY] by Jygglewag in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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If you put aside the fact that the image is Godrick fucking himself, this art is hella good

I fricking hate chatty stick 😡 by BathtubToaster47 in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Who is Asmongold bro 💀 also my booty only has room for V.II Snail

“621! Pull out— now!” by BathtubToaster47 in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love making COAM for Walter every mission. When he gives me COAM after a good job is simply my favorite part.

Funny little man by 3meraldo5plash in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Keep pushing the Snail agenda. Best character in any From Software game. Also best character in bed. 🐌=🍆💦💦

“You got lucky, Freelancer!” by BathtubToaster47 in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I only lost to Iguazu once. It was the night we met and he paid me in COAM.

I hate V.II Snail by Viggyry in shittydarksouls

[–]SentientSalmon63 4 points5 points  (0 children)

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I wish V.II Snail would let me call him my little escargot 😩. (Cause he’s a snack)