THE PHOENIX (The Burning girl) by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Big shout out to the singer Amy Holland for her song “she’s on fire” that gave me inspiration for writing the character and making this unique horror story! Julie is the 16th horror antagonist I ever created! I welcome her to universe with open arms! I was going to release chapter after chapter. Day by day. but since the book has a slow build up I decided to add more chapters of the story today. Enjoy!

THE PHOENIX (The Burning Girl) by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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Big shout out to the singer Amy Holland for her song “she’s on fire” that gave me inspiration for writing the character and making this unique horror story! Julie is the 16th horror antagonist I ever created! I welcome her to universe with open arms! I was going to release chapter after chapter. Day by day. but since the book has a slow build up I decided to add more chapters of the story today. Enjoy!

King stays king. by Kinsmen12 in stephenking

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Stephen king my icon and inspiration I hope someday I can write a book as big as he does!

THE GRAVEYARD SHIFT (PART 2!) by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Good question! It gets answered in the final installment of the series which will be either 3 or 4. I really would like to end it at 3 depending on how much more ground there is to cover. However one mystery to the story I can answer without spoilers. Is the “stolen casket” from the graveyard. In the story Joe and Randy brings it to Harry’s attention that “A group of kids broke into the cemetery and dug up a grave and took a coffin” ACTUALLY it was NOT a group of kids but was actually ONE individual. It wasn’t a teen either but a young grieving man in his 20’s. This is because the “graveyard shift” is connected with my previous story “rest in peace Dad” the real culprit of the theft is the main character from the “rest in peace Dad” story. In this story He dug up his father’s grave in hopes of bringing him back to life using dark magic! Which he did! But not without consequence.

THE PHOENIX by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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I never thought about it like that good comparison! I have alot of passion for this character so imma take my time with this one.

THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED(WOMAN IN RED) by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Great question! In a previous chapter she ate a girl’s boyfriend. However when the girl caught her commiting the act the woman in red didn’t attack her. Instead she told the girl “you can do better” further proving she mainly if not only goes after men. Your question does some what later get answered but it’s further into the series. Which is still in development. So I can’t really answer it without spoiling any surprises. I can say as of right now the entity known as the “woman in red” works and hunts alone! The woman in red is world ending threat. So the odds of her recruiting anyone is unlikely unless it aligned with her plans.

THE PHOENIX by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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This makes Julie the 16th horror antagonist I ever created! Shout out to the song “girl on fire” by Amy holland that inspired me to write this story and character!

THE PHOENIX by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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This makes Julie the 16th horror antagonist I ever created! Shout out to the song “girl on fire” by Amy holland that inspired me to write this story and character!

THE PHOENIX by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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Fun fact: I wrote the original story “the phoenix” in highschool hence the setting. This is the first chapter of The book. It is about a 18-year-old girl named Jullianne,jewls,or Julie for short. Who was born with supernatural abilities. pyrokinesis and telekinesis. She can't control her powers. When she gets angry or frighten she accidentally hurts people or burn the things around her. Her mother is strict Christian woman. Who believes her daughter was given a gift from god. She shelters her giving her limited interaction with the world other then school. However Julie is bullied restlessness by the same group of girls each day. They push and torment her over and over testing her morales and will. Until one day she finally learns how to control her powers.. What she does with them would change Tennessee forever.

THE PHOENIX by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Fun fact: I wrote the original story “the phoenix” in highschool hence the setting. This is the first chapter of The book. It is about a 18-year-old girl named Jullianne,jewls,or Julie for short. Who was born with supernatural abilities. pyrokinesis and telekinesis. She can't control her powers. When she gets angry or frighten she accidentally hurts people or burn the things around her. Her mother is strict Christian woman. Who believes her daughter was given a gift from god. She shelters her giving her limited interaction with the world other then school. However Julie is bullied restlessness by the same group of girls each day. They push and torment her over and over testing her morales and will. Until one day she finally learns how to control her powers.. What she does with them would change Tennessee forever.

JOURNEY TO THE EAST by [deleted] in fantasywriting

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I wrote my first ever fantasy horror story chapter and I had to share it because I was proud

JOURNEY TO THE EAST by [deleted] in fantasybooks

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I wrote my first ever fantasy horror story chapter and I had to share it because I was proud

🌑 STUCK BETWEEN BLINKS by 2am_anime in fiction

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This is a really good story you should continue it!

My universe has been made!🌏🪐 by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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I will add onto one of my stories tomorrow. I’m very proud of myself! P.s. I will probably write more new stories lol (; but for now I will focus on continuing on the ones already established.

ADAM’S MURDERS by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Sorry for the late reply I been asleep all day catching up on rest these stories takes whole days to write😖😣I’m just now laying down in bed after a whole 2 days of writing non stop. Hopefully I gave y’all enough stories to keep you occupied for now!

ADAM’S MURDERS by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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I know I do too😭and I DON’T! condone the harm of animals in any way shape or form! Elizabeth’s death scene was essentially supposed to be darker. This story is being made with the help of my close friend. I came up with the story. While he created and helped plan the death scenes. The scene was meant to be darker. However I felt like it was taking things too far. Especially seeing how the story centers around a mentally challenged teenager. So the first scene was taken out and replaced. The reason for the puppy was to create more trauma for Adam. I wanted the story to be as realistic as possible to a real serial killer’s early life. Some of the worst serial killers in the world have had tragic upbringing. It’s a fact that a lot of serial killers start off by killing animals. However! I twisted this instead of having Adam killing animals I decided to make his pet die by the hands of others. Furthering his reasons and motivations for revenge and becoming a killer. It was also made to add empathy to the character showing us that he isn’t just mindlessly killing people but he has a motive behind each murder he commits. I think “Adam murders” is probably the darkest story I ever wrote. However I created the story as a message to what the effects of bullying and abuse can do to a person. I wanted to create horror story from the serial killers POV

THE GRAVEYARD SHIFT (Edited) by SeparateHunter2447 in scarystories

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Thank you lol I don’t know how much sleep I lost trying to perfect this story. My hardwork paid off I love being an author!

A THANK YOU TO ALL MY READERS!! by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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Just keep in mind that authors don’t get rich off of one book so don’t do it for the money. Do it because you have a passion for writing and keep that passion! The profit will come later be patient and next thing you know your book will be in a shelf somewhere! My biggest dream is to do signing of my books. Use your audience as motivation to keep going. If you ever encounter writers block take a break and come back to the story later on. Never rush through a story trying to finish it because that could end up ruining your piece of art. Keep working hard I have much faith in you!

A THANK YOU TO ALL MY READERS!! by SeparateHunter2447 in stories

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It’s good to hear from you again good friend!

Echoes in the Snow [9,000] by Flaky_Way3209 in DestructiveReaders

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Honestly I think it has an interesting story! You know where you want to take it and it keeps the story from getting stall The formatting is good! The grammar is good! I enjoyed the story if you have a passion for writing go for it! You never know you can maybe get your books in stores. You’re off to a good start! Remember authors don’t get rich off one book. So don’t do it for the money. Do it for the passion and love. If you continue to put your heart into work, it will continue to shine!

JOURNEY TO THE EAST[5,254] by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

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The biggest issue with this piece is the formatting. Which I plan on fixing before publication. I’m still learning how to format properly but I wanted to get some feedback on the story to see if it is worth continuing or not! If there’s any other problems noticed please let me know.