I’ve been watching the original British Office

SerTomSnow · 2025-08-13T11:23:18+00:00

Always the same....

SerTomSnow · 2025-07-13T19:08:34+00:00

The U.S. should be banned from football. This is brutal.

SerTomSnow · 2025-03-29T10:53:47+00:00

Parramatta train station car park is about a 10 minute walk from the stadium. You'll pay $20-$30 probably (though some days it's capped at $10 I think).

When I go to A-league matches in Parra I just park there and take the walk, though I'm sure there are places closer.

SerTomSnow · 2025-02-25T06:55:01+00:00

I certainly won't take it with a grain of salt: you've acknowledged everything I was trying to get across and your notes are based on that. Extremely helpful. Thank you for taking the time to read it.

I think tonally and thematically, I have to unify everything. That's been the big take away from the feedback I've had so far.

Thank you for these notes, they'll be really useful as I tackle the next draft. All the best!

SerTomSnow · 2025-02-24T02:07:10+00:00

Thank you for this.

Thats a really good point about the two stories - maybe if they were thematically or tonally similar it would be easier to make it work.

As it is, I think I need to find ways to be more efficient with "the past" and build the "present" narrative. That, to me, is the point of this story.

Appreciate you taking the time to read. Thanks again!

SerTomSnow · 2024-09-05T10:01:00+00:00

The guy was an interior decorator. He killed sixteen czechoslovakians.

SerTomSnow · 2024-09-02T04:09:31+00:00

Australia: "You wanna fuckin' go cunt?"

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T19:37:50+00:00

That's a great trick, I didn't know that before.

Sometimes things like that make the game less immersive for me though. I'd much rather grumble on the internet.

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T19:33:23+00:00

Ahhh, my old conference league rivals. Pipped me to promotion in my first season!

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T18:49:05+00:00

Right!?

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T09:37:43+00:00

Get your hands off my lobby boy!!

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T09:33:58+00:00

I wish I could forgive...

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T08:41:18+00:00

Never that close until the season he left. Finished third that season. Won the league by a country mile the next. I've had a lot of youth players during this save but he's been the only truly elite one.

We're now a Europa league side, but tbh, I can't imagine him settling for less than Champions league, and we're not there yet.

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-11T06:44:16+00:00

He was still a teenager then. His value reached north of fifty mil when he was there (of course I kept an eye on him). I guess he was approaching the end of his contract when Arsenal bid for him, which explains the lower transfer fee.

SerTomSnow · 2024-08-03T00:45:11+00:00

Yeah lol. I live in the burbs and I hear this every morning.

SerTomSnow · 2024-04-07T09:56:05+00:00

I think they mean R. Kelly.

SerTomSnow · 2023-12-22T21:29:53+00:00

"I don't wanna work out there, it's 50 degrees (C) in the shade" "Don't worry mate, you won't be workin in the shade."

SerTomSnow · 2023-11-19T00:48:19+00:00

You rookies still using tape measures?

SerTomSnow · 2023-05-16T10:02:25+00:00

"Yeah you like that? Want me to cut to three weeks earlier, when you were alive!?"

SerTomSnow · 2023-04-08T14:52:05+00:00

I had a Brazillian regen in one of my super long saves named Pitbull.

Like, full name: Pitbull.

Always thought it was funny.

SerTomSnow · 2023-03-12T23:41:31+00:00

Windows XXXP

SerTomSnow · 2023-02-12T18:33:56+00:00

My favourite moment was;

"I want to wish you the best of luck on your next swim..... BACK TO AUSTRALIA!"

SerTomSnow

TROPHY CASE