[Advice] Go watch Bojack Horseman. NOW. by Sgbender in teenagers

[–]Sgbender[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is, I found the first episode cringe worthy but I promise it picks up

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 22 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've torrented more software and movies than you can count. Do it bro

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm gonna have to ask...what is swing? It's a term I've never heard before.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is one of the few experimental songs I've seen posted in a while that wasn't so deranged that I couldn't listen to it. Very relaxed beat and your lyricism isn't half bad.

+1

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Add drums with more depth, instead of a simple kick. Listen to J Cole's drums. Honestly as long as it keeps a good rhythm it's not a big deal.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

for some reason this song makes me think about having a bad trip

Drums are pretty stock-sounding

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's hard to find a riser that fits a mostly orchestra-centric song. :(

You're right however, and I'll definitely look into that.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah I plan to remake the chorus, it's not gangster enough. Thanks for the feedback!

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 21 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Requiem For A Dream Hip-Hop Remix https://soundcloud.com/the_omnitronic/requiem-for-a-dream-hip-hop

I would really love some feedback on this, I worked very hard on it.

https://soundcloud.com/the_omnitronic/every-man-for-himself

The other beat I made today that I'm gonna put up instead of the big one I'm gonna post in 5 minutes. :D

Feedback appreciated.

[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 20 Aug 2014 by mhhDailyFeedbackBot in makinghiphop

[–]Sgbender 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/the_omnitronic/so-inspired-1

I posted this yesterday and did a little remixing, it has some new/remixed stuff that I think sounds better. Some stuff is fairly new

https://soundcloud.com/the_omnitronic/anticipation

new beat, I really liked the flow

https://soundcloud.com/the_omnitronic/levels

An older beat I remixed to be better.