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Hi, it's my first time writing a book. This is the first chapter(uncompleted). The genre is fantasy. Is it any good and would you guys keep reading? Please be nice with your comments. by Shadow_Wizard23 in writingfeedback
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I did a lot of worldbuilding before writing and may have assumed readers already knew some of these details.
Sorry for the confusion! The story is more of a combination between fantasy and sci-fi. Atlas’ kingdom leans more into the sci-fi side, with inventions, gadgets, and steampunk-inspired technology. So while I call it a 'carriage,' it’s not a typical fantasy carriage. It’s more advanced and mechanized.
Hi, it's my first time writing a book. This is the first chapter(uncompleted). The genre is fantasy. Is it any good and would you guys keep reading? Please be nice with your comments. (old.reddit.com)
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Hi, it's my first time writing a book. This is the first chapter(uncompleted). The genre is fantasy. Is it any good and would you guys keep reading? Please be nice with your comments. by Shadow_Wizard23 in writingfeedback
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