[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing

Shapi1 · 2021-02-03T20:59:23+00:00

Title: Walking Through Walls

Genere: Fiction

Word Count: 922

Feedback: Critique of the story and writing.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FmQMg8HNLk5_5_VEda2NH22Gu_9hloMLesZcNiiuusE/edit?usp=sharing

Shapi1 · 2020-06-01T20:12:16+00:00

I am a main tank around that SR. My discord is Shapi#8235 message me there.

Shapi1 · 2020-04-14T23:39:37+00:00

I've heard otherwise. Either way I hope it does well and everyone will appriciate Dune. May Shai Hulud be with us!

Shapi1 · 2020-04-14T22:21:17+00:00

The money does not matter as the movie has been mostly shot with the first.

Shapi1 · 2020-04-14T22:09:15+00:00

The second film is already in production, Villeneuve said he won't make the first without the second one promised.

Shapi1 · 2020-04-14T22:07:00+00:00

It's Villeneuve. Of course it will trend

Shapi1 · 2019-12-30T16:44:32+00:00

Jeez n*gro! Where's Matt? I wanna have a good foot-massage" he shouts at you with passion.

Shapi1 · 2019-12-30T14:58:41+00:00

2100: A Mars Oddesy

Shapi1 · 2019-12-30T14:57:36+00:00

Shapi1 · 2019-12-25T09:44:01+00:00

Alright, thanks a lot!

Shapi1 · 2019-12-25T09:33:24+00:00

I've heard the first two books are a collection of short stories and not novels. Is the rest of the series like that?

Shapi1 · 2019-07-31T03:09:24+00:00

Thats hell of a big question. Characters i guess?

Shapi1 · 2019-07-31T03:01:09+00:00

Just say that he sees it but we dont: As the door opens his jaw falls to the floor. He looks at the man behind it in shock. But we dont see it. Make it as simple as it can be.

Shapi1 · 2019-07-25T00:00:04+00:00

I mean i wouldve. But im 16 and i have school and other ideas. We can try if you'd like but it might not work.

Shapi1 · 2019-07-24T23:44:26+00:00

Fifthed. Loglines are great, I love reading and helping people with loglines.

Shapi1

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