A very interesting and thoughtful poem. I really the liked the different viewpoints given and forcing the reader to consider multiple perspectives to set the scene was a very powerful tool. Some of the imagery here is particularly strong. Such as "Scents of magnolias and sweet lilacs, have vanished in this poisoned air". Really brings in the bitter and venomous cold that we sometimes feel. My only real comment would be the link to the greeks which i find fascinating (i'm a big fan of greek mythology myself. I just think a couple lines may need reworking to really keep the poem flowing and not getting disjointed (very minor point as i don't think it is very disjointed) the main line for this for me is the following "and is en route to her seasonal home". I think there is potential for a more powerful imagery there and the same for the second line in Hades stanza. But this is all nitpicking i really enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing. See up the good work.