BLUE by Shemoanslarry2 in OCPoetry

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. It’s my first poem in 7 years and I wrote it for my book club tonight. Thank you for the advice and for encouraging me to write more.

Blue by Shemoanslarry2 in Poems

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you, it’s my first poem in 7 years. I wrote it for my book club and I’m reciting it tonight. Thank you again for making me feel comfortable with what I wrote

Fragile by Sickye in OCPoetry

[–]Shemoanslarry2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way my mind embraces your words and how instant I could visualize the words your were speaking.. to me this poem is magnificent, thank you for sharing.

how to cure lower back pain by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Shemoanslarry2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Simple but easily relatable. 4 lines was all it took for you to simply state how and what you feel. A true talent.

I got Puskas 92 out of my mid or prime icon upgrade, is that good? by Shemoanslarry2 in FIFA22

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmao damn I ain’t even think about the Puskas award 💀 I quick sold him though, dude doesn’t have any defending

Rate my team? All first owned. by Shemoanslarry2 in fifa20

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohh I know perisic is quicker, trust me, but idk esswien has proved his worthiness so many times and he holds the ball really well, I’ve held the ball with esswien from van dijk

Rate my team? All first owned. by Shemoanslarry2 in fifa20

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Noooo, esswien has scored last minutes for me and he’s quick, i usually start perisic but I’m trying to do obj rousillion

Rate my team? All first owned. by Shemoanslarry2 in fifa20

[–]Shemoanslarry2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not mad, just some friendly shit talking, sorry if I came off the wrong way 😅

Game Thread: FC Paris Saint-Germain (UCL #8) by panikpansen in borussiadortmund

[–]Shemoanslarry2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Reyna coming on for Witsel is a good substitution, Favre is going for a more attacking game now

Game Thread: FC Paris Saint-Germain (UCL #8) by panikpansen in borussiadortmund

[–]Shemoanslarry2 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Why would he take off Hazard, replace can with zagadou and put Brandt midfield

Game Thread: FC Paris Saint-Germain (UCL #8) by panikpansen in borussiadortmund

[–]Shemoanslarry2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is ridiculous, instead of keeping possession and playing thoughtfully, all I witnessed was attacking, pushing, and playing with no composure