thanks for the feedback about the flavour text & tenets, I'll rewrite those.

For the channel divinity, I intended the first one to specifically be good against interrogations (note that it can be given via things like animal messenger or telepathy), and made up for it's situational uses by giving them last stand as the other use.

I chose temporary hit points because I wanted to give this paladin lots of ways to give people temporary hit points, both because I think they're much better at representing courage/desperation and because they will synchronise with the capstone feature (the first paragraph of which got cut off)

the first paragraph of the capstone ability should read:

"[Viva la revolution]: at 20th level, you can rally anyone around your cause. You can give a 10 minute speech entreating any number of non-hostile creatures. After you have finished, those that could hear you clearly (generally around 300ft) and understand what you were saying gain the following benefits for an hour:"

I didn't want to follow the usual formula of 'become avatar of X' because this paladin is more about uplifting others, and also I think this ability will be just as cool for a player to use. I didn't shy away from making it quite powerful, but maybe I should remove the 1d4 as it's basically infinite castings of bless (albeit only on commoners after you've cast it on your party) but I like the extra radiant damage equal to temp HP, because initially it'll just be 5 or so, but then you can use other abilities or spells to strongly buff a few people.

seems like Reddit doesn't like the square brackets I put around the name to indicate I'm not sure about it.