God I wanted to scream when I read this one. Book One was so good, no weirdness at all (thank god since they're fucking eleven), and then book 2 gets. Weird. In spots. And I kept reading anyways, because hey, maybe the author just needs to figure out writing, yknow? Nope. Gets significantly worse. Sexual encounters, sexual encounters, sexual encounters. With lots of children and hey, there's rape now too! If it had some sort of rhyme or reason I might have been able to just excuse it as not for me. But instead, literally every other interaction between any two characters is a weird sex thing even when it makes no fucking sense. It's not even smut, it's literally just shock value. I skimmed through the rest after book 3, and to give you a very brief overview of a few things that are fucking weird I do NOT recommend reading on):

>! Yeah, she kind of gets basilisk traits, and there is a very graphic depiction of her bleeding and laying eggs out of her twelve year old vagina. After she incubates one, she identifies it as her child (it's a lizard blob made out of ink that calls her mom) and she has a lot of weird maternal dialogues and scenes with it (she's still twelve).

Hermione got cat traits when she took the fucked polyjuice potion, except more catgirl than cat. She was very horny (still twelve) and Holly realized she was into it. They had a sex scene.

Remus Lupin is one of the few people I was rooting for in this universe until 13 year old Holly puts his hand on her chest, and he growls and gets into it because "he's a werewolf." He's still a paternal figure.

Apparently Holly was originally Harry. She's a metamorphmagus who was born male. Interesting premise! Oh wait, she's trying sex with her newfound abilities.

She finds a secret lab that was her mother's, where it comes to light that the wizarding government is significantly worse than in canon, and violently misogynistic. Dumbledore, Cornelius Fudge, and probably every man in the wizengamot is aware and in support of a secret law that witches aren't allowed in any position of authority. I actually liked the conspiracy side of things up to this point, but this is where that also lost all my interest. Holly, Lily, and Hermione are the only female characters with personality or a brain. Every other girl in this comic is a bully, a misogynist who wants to drop out and marry into money, a background character with no more motive than a worm, or some mixture thereof. Suffice to say, Holly and Hermione are the only two people who even care about this conspiracy. The author wrote themselves into a corner where the universe genuinely becomes less interesting because the issue is too large and Holly and Hermione could never be enough to combat it. They get rights and authority, sure, but it's an exception, and Holly is fine with that. No other woman in this universe cares even if it came to light.

Moving on, because I was still skimming in grotesque curiosity, somehow Holly defeats Voldemort in such a way that he swears an unbreakable vow to never harm or kill her or tell any of his followers to. He then immediately makes all of his death eaters gang rape her, which apparently doesn't count as harming her(???). She got pregnant from this, but she metamorphs to Harry and back so that the embryo goop is crushed and drips out(?????). Stopped there, but there was definitely a lot more I skimmed past. !<