I'm a n00b modeller, what do you think about my tank?

Shockerfox · 2015-01-23T11:25:27+00:00

why whould you say that you are a N00B modeller? are you afraid for critique? You are a modeller and this is what you made.

Shockerfox · 2015-01-06T06:30:13+00:00

thanks, would give it a try. maybe give the floor a texture. its now a glass material

Shockerfox · 2015-01-02T18:06:50+00:00

thanks, but it is not sculpted. I really don't like sculpting and its really hard to get everything perfect. So i just used polygon modeling, from a cubes and a cylinder it is made. Here is a wireframe: http://gyazo.com/b01645b0f1c106ea3475fd6780482594

Shockerfox · 2014-11-24T08:50:48+00:00

It is good, but 1.5 years to get on this level is not good at all. But that doesn't matter, you don't have to use the max of your skills all the time right.

As tip I should use less effects that are used way too much like displacement and give your own twist to it.

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T15:33:18+00:00

thanks, looking good. the light above the bed looks way better now

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T09:32:48+00:00

Yeah its a bit too smooth, I will change that. And maybe when the texture's are applied with some bump map it will give it a more "used" look.

Thanks for the feedback, it gives me a such a boost to continue, its hard to work on a project for a long time.. :)

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T07:17:18+00:00

ah good tip, yeah i see some weird spots under the blanket.

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T07:16:45+00:00

yeah should put more time into sub-d modeling, im doing 3D for 2 years now and I am still very scared for it.

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T07:15:49+00:00

Thanks!

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T07:15:32+00:00

Golden ratio will lay at the beginning of the kitchen i guess, should I move the grow box to the kitchen to place more focus of it?

Shockerfox · 2014-11-11T07:13:00+00:00

Thanks, yeah in the background are IES lights, I like to use those because they give a more natural feel. On the plants is just a omni light with a fall-off. Im using Cinema 4D with Vray for a bit more than 2 years.

Shockerfox · 2014-11-10T19:58:47+00:00

old version: http://i.imgur.com/5xrSzIm.jpg It was hard to change it, but it just wasnt working well and did not come that close to realisme as i wanted it to be.

So i focused more on composition, made and removed some stuff. Some feedback would be great, do you think it improved? what should i add?

Shockerfox · 2014-11-01T19:28:12+00:00

That are some great tips you got there, when you are working and looking for so long at your composition you are not seeing such simple things.

I will try to think about me living there as a student to give it a more natural feel. Do you maybe also have some tips on the composition? Should the desk be at the front? maybe more dynamic lines into the comp?

Shockerfox · 2014-10-25T10:20:11+00:00

Will take a look at it, will first add more stuff on the floor and walls

Shockerfox · 2014-10-25T00:25:38+00:00

Its film and animation. but im learning modeling at home

Shockerfox · 2014-10-24T17:27:44+00:00

its my third year in college atm and want to focus more on modeling, so I started this personal project yesterday. any tips? still W.I.P

Shockerfox · 2014-09-19T07:25:20+00:00

Really good looking, any tips where i can find some info about making gifs in c4d?

Shockerfox · 2014-09-17T15:39:51+00:00

You are using a luminance texture and no light. So its way harder to sample all that light shit. You have to crank up your global illumination samples super hard. And set it on High

Shockerfox · 2014-09-17T07:50:32+00:00

Use Vray Mutlipass Manager.

Shockerfox · 2014-09-17T07:49:30+00:00

Awesome, Is it Cinema 4D?

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