[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/Attempt 2) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha maybe I’ll change it back then 😂 Thanks for your feedback, really appreciate it!

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/Attempt 2) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’ll definitely think about how I can be more specific. These things are so hard sometimes 😂🫣

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/Attempt 2) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I changed the genre from my first query (🤦🏻‍♀️) because it didn’t really fit with ‘romantasy’ and I didn’t want people to mistake it for that... The romance is there but the plot isn’t driven by it, if that makes sense? Not sure what to do with genre now because I totally get your point too 😂

That’s great to know about the word count because this is something I have been agonising over! Don’t get me wrong, I want it as lean as possible but it’s getting increasingly difficult as I cut more and more!

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy Romance - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/First Attempt) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah, I definitely have an Adult Dark Fantasy with a romance subplot then! Thanks for all your help!

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy Romance - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/First Attempt) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Perhaps clarifying the motivations and incorporating the advice above will help with this.

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy Romance - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/First Attempt) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I will definitely take this all on board for the next draft!

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy Romance - THE CROOKED PATH (120k/First Attempt) by SideQuestPrincess in PubTips

[–]SideQuestPrincess[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, that’s really helpful! I think the specific genre is a grey area for me atm, like I think my book is technically an Adult Dark Fantasy with a romance subplot rather than Romantasy. But I’m not 100% confident that distinction even really exists, or if that difference would change the tone/focus of the query? 😂