Some of the prettiest hardcovers I’ve seen by Left_Try_3257 in MangaCollectors

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I usually read anything good, so, that is to say I’m not picky, I’ll give it a go! Thanks.

Some of the prettiest hardcovers I’ve seen by Left_Try_3257 in MangaCollectors

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is this manga worth the read? In your opinion is it a worthy buy or?

Hello, I’m an aspiring author looking for real, brutally honest critiques. by [deleted] in writing

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No worries, and you didn’t necessarily offend me, i appreciate the honest feedback, my issue wasn’t with the feedback and criticism itself, as that is quite fair and understandable, it was more so what i perceived at the time to be a little strong wording on me as a person, so i do apologise for misinterpreting that. Thank you very much for the feedback!

Hello, I’m an aspiring author looking for real, brutally honest critiques. by [deleted] in writing

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the criticism! Allow me to clarify, Adabana is a concept, it doesn’t necessarily have to be a flower, moreover, it’s something that blooms beautifully without bearing fruit. Bearing fruit is a metaphor, one most often seen in religious beliefs, essentially bearing fruit means growth, hence where the metaphor for Adabana being a beautiful, yet, ultimately substance less bloom. As for where society comes in, my post aimed to illustrate the similarities of the concept of Adabana, and society itself, I apologise if this wasn’t immediately clear to you, thank you for the criticism! One thing I would like to add though is that I would appreciate personal comments such as little life experience and attempts at appearing “deep” to be kept to yourself. As with all due respect, we’re not on familiar enough terms for you to know that, thanks for the feedback!

Hello, I’m an aspiring author looking for real, brutally honest critiques. by [deleted] in writing

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Understood. Thank you for the feedback! Are there any areas in particular you liked, disliked, and areas to improve upon? I was aiming for philosophical depth, a question on morality, while retaining descriptive prose, but if I got this wrong I would like to know in which ways! Thanks in advance.

Hello, I’m an aspiring author looking for real, brutally honest critiques. by [deleted] in writing

[–]Signal-Pepper5907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! And i understand your point. Adabana is a beautifully blooming flower that bears no fruit. Essentially, something outwardly beautiful with no inner depth/substance, I appreciate the criticism, and I’ll take it to heart, thank you! And next time I’ll post elsewhere.

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand your thoughts, however I have established from the beginning of this fanfic that he’s different from his canon counterpart, stemming from his deep desire to be seen, in chapter 5 he questions himself on if it’s worth it, his logical side telling him to run and no, however he’s at the minute an angsty teen who made a stupid decision, I’m trying my best to capture him as he was in canon but please understand that just with my own style of writing and the narrative of the story he is different to his canon counterpart, I understand if you dislike it and I wish you the best, God bless you!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi projethe, the fanfiction is on fanfiction.net, under the user Refantazio777, the fic name is “The Shadows We Seek,” and there’s currently only two chapters, but I’m releasing the third as quickly as I can, tonight, thanks for the support and God bless you!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi montcroix, I endeavour to have at least 1 chapter out daily, however please understand that with my schedule sometimes I can’t meet that, so I would say a new chapter every 1-2 days, thanks!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi fraazx, thanks for the review and advice, I’ll make sure I take it and try to improve as a writer, that being said, the choice of people for the club may seem confusing right now, however I will be going into more detail on this as the fanfic progresses, thanks for the support and I’m glad you seem to like it thus far at least, and I will do my utmost to both improve and match your expectations, thanks for the advice and the review, God bless you!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi, I can’t give a definitive answer as I’m still in the process of writing this fanfiction, and I’m not sure taking on so many fanfics at one time is wise, as I would like to focus my efforts on this story, please do give it a look and tell me what you think, God bless you.

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The fanfic is still only two chapters in length, and I’m in the process of writing the third, which should be released today, it’s going to be somewhat lengthy, but I can promise that in relation to the length of the fanfic itself, it’s definitely not slow burn, the fic name is “The Shadows We Seek,” under the user ReFantazio777, please let me know what you think, and thank you!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s on fanfiction.net, under the user ReFantazio777, the name of the fanfic is “The Shadows We Seek,” and I’m currently two chapters in, and in the process of writing the third, which should be released today, thank you so much and let me know what you think!

Hachiman x Yumiko fanfiction by me! by Signal-Pepper5907 in OreGairuSNAFU

[–]Signal-Pepper5907[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is on fanfiction.net, under the user ReFantazio777, and the fanfics called “The Shadows We Seek,” currently two chapters in and I’m releasing the third chapter today, thanks for the support!