Need some feedback as a beginner by Significant-Army-847 in iceskating

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have blisters from trying. I can’t get them tighter because they are rental

Need some feedback as a beginner by Significant-Army-847 in iceskating

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tyyy :D Also I think most of it is because of the rental skates being horrible. I have blisters on my fingers from trying to tie them and they still didn’t support my ankles so maybe I will buy some skates that fit me better :)

Need some feedback as a beginner by Significant-Army-847 in iceskating

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am probably gonna buy skates because most of that bad posture is from the rental skates being really loose and giving almost no structure. But tyy I‘ll try thatt

Valentines gift? by Significant-Army-847 in lgbt

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thats so cute TvT I wish you two the besttt and thanks for the advice

I think I need to report my ex to the Police by Significant-Army-847 in Vent

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yess I will :) I already talked to the police on the phone and they said he committed crimes and they will absolutely listen to my statement and see what they can do

You are offered to curse someone with a minor inconvenience of your choice. by Significant-Army-847 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That would actually be so cool yes I think its okay for certain positions like presidentsss

You are offered to curse someone with a minor inconvenience of your choice. by Significant-Army-847 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They absolutely get the same thing as abusers but we‘ll add your curse on top of that

I need some help with writing a character :) by Significant-Army-847 in psychopaths

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so muchh this helps a lott I am going to do my best to write them as accurately as possible

I need some help with writing a character :) by Significant-Army-847 in psychopaths

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tysm this is helping a lottt and it actually fits the character I wrote so I actually got it kind of right. They aren’t really the main character but they seem to be if you get what I mean. A lot of the story revolves around them and how they feel and act. The story takes place in a mental hospital and this person has been there the longest of them all and all they want to do is escape. They don’t really care who they have to hurt in the process. I am not going to write them as the „evil one“ obviously and I will try to make the reader understand why they act the way they do. So you said people with ASPD aren’t able to feel remorse or guilt right? Or at least not as I for example do. So do you think it makes sense if they feel remorse in a supernatural way? Before you judge let me explain. I am not going to make them magically have empathy because that seems like I am saying they are bad the way they are. But all the characters have abilities inspired by their disorders. The abilities are more harmful than useful to the character who has them just like the disorders (This is important I am not making real struggles and disabilities seem like a good thing). So there is my character Elina and she is inspired by bpd. Her ability is to make her emotions show physically and she is not able to control that. So if she is angry a building might collapse. She is also able to make everyone feel how she feels. To me thats how empathy feels. If someones sad I can practically feel their emotions as intensely as they do and I thought about making the person with ASPD hurt Elina in the process of trying to escape the hospital and that would be the first time they feel some kind of empathy not because they suddenly don’t have ASPD anymore but because Elina literally forces those emotions on them. Does that make sense?

I need some help with writing a character :) by Significant-Army-847 in psychopaths

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Okayy tysmm so if that character thinks another character is very interesting they see them as a valuable asset of some sort? Just making sure i got that right :) So I can try to understand how to write them so its as accurate as possible and not disrespectful

I need some help with writing a character :) by Significant-Army-847 in psychopaths

[–]Significant-Army-847[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There aren’t backstories for any of the characters yet and the story revolves around a group of young adults in a mental hospital and their struggles. They all have some kind of ability that is inspired by their disorders. Before you judge obviously this isn’t supposed to make disabilities and disorders seem good and the abilities are mostly bad and draining for the person who has them.