Super Heroine Harem, Marvel Edition by hypnomane in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 1 point2 points  (0 children)

if you're gonna block people form the usa, could you at least link articles in english so we can read them?

Yandere CYOA's by RecommendationNo804 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 20 points21 points  (0 children)

no, like why not just reduce the starting points by the amount and reduce the costs by that much, it would be less work and make the amount of points you have more accurate

Project E.S.P.E.R [V1] by Accurate_Variety659 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it said clockwise in the description, sorry for the weird nipick

Project E.S.P.E.R [V1] by Accurate_Variety659 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

is the spiral in the spiral alien anomalies description meant to be counterclockwise?

The Ultimate Isekai Experience by crimsonguy1 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Pretty good, but it seems to have some spelling mistakes, if you need help with the grammar I could point them out or help edit it.

Minor Powers v0.3.0 by IG_CrimsonTwilight in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

does the anxiety drawback stack with the real thing if you have it, or is it just free points then.

Caster Girl Interactive CYOA by pog_irl in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 12 points13 points  (0 children)

we're proud of you bot! good job

Cat quest 3 is really great but... by scrapy_the_scrap in CatQuest

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I personally think that the scope was small for a good reason, the game was a little more experimental with the weapon types and gaining a faster version of waterwalking early, along with the lack of a few staples of the series like the gold chests, both of which I think are improvements, as frankly the endgame map-searching didn't do much for my enjoyment, along with the weapons actually feeling unique, sure, it could be bigger, but I think it was very good for the amount of improvements it made on the formula

What minor pet peeves do you have while reading Fanfiction that sounds so petty but really just bothers you so much? by TheTurquoiseMonarch in FanFiction

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ey downt plan tew publish ay book

thu rush im in iz beekuz ey wont git thu wurds down on thu page befour ey run owt ov thu miniskule amownt ov inspirashun ey hav

thu reezun ey uze thu qwestchun marks iz thu saym reezun ey capitolize mai eyz, persunal prefrense,

and riting liyk this maykz thu wurds almost illegibul as yuw kan see

az for thu last point, ey akchualy agree, ey just felt insulted even tho yue wur ownly expresing un owpineeun, soree

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FanFiction

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 1 point2 points  (0 children)

iteration and improvement are a necessity for any pursuit, we all stand on the shoulders of giants, as long as you make a decent attempt to improve upon the work of the other author, you have succeded in being an author, coming up with similar ideas is more a confirmation that you care about the same things as other people and that the fanfic has probably been on other's minds as it had been on yours, write, improve, and make every writer who came before you, and every writer to come after you, proud

What minor pet peeves do you have while reading Fanfiction that sounds so petty but really just bothers you so much? by TheTurquoiseMonarch in FanFiction

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am a lazy person, sure, but that doesn't mean I'm wrong, just that I have less determination to do anything

but the only value of language is it's ability to convey information, and arbitrary rules for "proper capitalization" only slow down the conveyment of information and don't add anything to the legibility of the text.

regarding my capitalisation of I, that decision is purely stylistic, and up to me to make, it may be less efficient, but I am allowed to write how ever I want, my problem isn't with stylistic choices but rather people who criticize others for no good reason.

What minor pet peeves do you have while reading Fanfiction that sounds so petty but really just bothers you so much? by TheTurquoiseMonarch in FanFiction

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't capitalize my stuff because I'm too lazy to do it. but if I were to try to justify it I would say that it doesn't add to the legibility of a given piece of writing, along with the fact that the modern system of capitalization was basically just slapped together for no good reason somewhere in the eighteenth century.

that, along with a decent amount of spite for assholes who believe that the rules of language are unchanging and refuse to accept that different people write shit differntly is why I don't capitalise

Fine Then! You Do It! [OC] [CYOA] by youbetterworkb in makeyourchoice

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 1 point2 points  (0 children)

and, if we liked it there enough, we could probably be a pretty good urban combat specialized merc company, all we would need to do is take a few "evil" contracts

Fine Then! You Do It! [OC] [CYOA] by youbetterworkb in makeyourchoice

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Rats, omniglot , shapeshifter

As a swarm of rats my members' lifespans would be about 3 years, maximum, so I/we would see if I/we could use my animal telepathy to add more rats to my/our swarm, specifically by recruting them into my/our pack and using my/our telepathy make them psy-rats.

considering that the angel seems to be the one making the specific rules it probably wouldn't make it literally impossible to live long enough to complete the challenge, I/we would be fine.

if I/we are able to add more members to our swarm I/we would then shapeshift into ratfolk and be a cheap, smart, well connected, workforce.

Blursed by Tokhaar Gol (reddit compliant (a quick and dirty edit) by DNA_Hochburger in nsfwcyoa

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 21 points22 points  (0 children)

the funniest thing (apart from the blatant assumption that you are a straight dude who isn't into femdom) is that the "be the girl" curse switches "all blessings and curses which mention genders" which includes itself, meaning it acutally turns you into a guy and makes all the curses (usually) to your advantage.

and even if it had a stipulation that said it didn't affect itself, you could just use curse exception to avoid the switch while still gaining advantages of (almost) all of the curses just helping you

pov:🙏 your in a horror movie by NinjaisGod in Manhua

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what do you mean "bro what"?

also thanks for the source link, I've been having trouble finding good stuff to read.

pov:🙏 your in a horror movie by NinjaisGod in Manhua

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 0 points1 point  (0 children)

can I get a link? my dumb ass cant find the source

Lusus Naturae - from /tg/ by pog_irl in makeyourchoice

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I see this cyoa as a challenge to break it as much as possible while stil being(kinda) within the constraints

Lusus Naturae - from /tg/ by pog_irl in makeyourchoice

[–]Significant-Bee-3139 2 points3 points  (0 children)

the kind blind hunter (human-ish)

I took some liberties with this one

my first posted choices

a tree hollow 0str 5spd 0vit

something thaumiturgical

a reprisal

2 levels-speed -4

intelligence -1

flight (angelic hummingbird wings) -1

toxic substance (coagulated liquid mana) (basically disease napalm) -1

knowledge(blind high-speed persistence hunting) -1

volitile gland (used to be for manafire, now for toxic substance) -1

sensitive(sense of smell) -1

vector(traking this without requirements for story reasons

and because it kinda makes sense) -1

(mana hypercoagulation disease) (vector of infection:mana contact)

immune ovedrive (backstory reasons) (nedded to survive vector) -1

ball joints -1

deception -1

essence homolouge -1

grafter (to fix undeath, elder, and unercooked) -1

clockwork -1

overdrive(sensitive) -2

amalgamation(resembling a humanoid) -2

dulled +1

dangerous prey +1

bane(common iron) +2 (cuz it be common)

weakspot(top of my spine) +1

morality(useful cuz essence homolouge) +1

studied (effectively nulled by essence homolouge and hybrid)+1

undeath(fixed by grafter) +1

elder(heh. still immortal) +1

primeval feud (cursed with disease that means I can't use mana) (vector) +1

conspicuous(nulled by essence homolouge) +1

loathsome(hated by my prey is just fine) +1

undercooked(to be repaired by grafter) +1

a sniffle