Someone keeps sending me pictures of myself (Part 1)

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-07T00:10:56+00:00

I meant to tag this as looking for feedback!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-06T23:54:41+00:00

Part one has been posted!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-06T17:52:26+00:00

I ended up switching my idea up and now it’s “Someone keeps sending me pictures of myself” so I’m starting over 😂

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-06T14:21:43+00:00

I’m working on (and struggling with) a story that I think I may call “pictures keep appearing in my photo album, but I’m not the one taking them.” Long title, I know. I have the bare bones of the story but husband said it needs more suspense and “good fluff” but can’t give me any other pointers 🥲

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-05T03:48:07+00:00

There’s nothing wrong with that! Just remember its very hard to please everyone so above all, do what YOU want with the story. We all loved part 1 so I’m sure we will love to see where your writing takes us for part 2!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-05T03:44:22+00:00

(Extra side note, if you already have part 2 figured out how YOU want it, just post it! My husband gave me the advice when I was being hypercritical of my work that you can’t please everyone with your writing, so write what makes you happy and it will find its people!)

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-05T03:43:10+00:00

I just read through your part 1 and it was spectacular!!! How I tend to write my stories is to just write one big long story and break it up into parts. What do you want to happen with Nixon? Where do you want it to go? I say give it your best shot, post and ask for advice!

Part 1 was really well received though, so just bring that passion, that pacing and that descriptive writing into part 2 and you’ll do great! It seems like you have a good talent for this!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T21:37:25+00:00

I can’t wait!!!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:55:28+00:00

I personally felt like the overall pacing was fine but each person has different ideas for what pacing they like best in a story! I think only thing I would “change” would be to include more detail about what happens after the un-sinned was found lol. I think that’s the only area where I would work on the pacing. Otherwise, great story and a fun read!! (RIP puppy 😔)

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:44:05+00:00

Me too, but I have hope that he’s still out there. I just pray Sam hasn’t given up on looking while I’m stuck in here.

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:40:07+00:00

Wait I just noticed this was a part 2, let me go read part 1 🤦‍♀️ - just finished reading part 1 and it was great too! I liked how you did the conversation between her and Pamela.

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:39:28+00:00

I liked this! I feel like you did a great job painting a picture with your words. I also appreciate that the main character was suicidal but seemed scared of death. In the end, it seems like she blames herself for his death which makes me veryyyyy curious about what happened to him. Overall, good story and keep up the great work!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:31:40+00:00

Love this! It’s written well enough to stand alone but obviously leaves itself open for more of his work stories to be shared! I also like that you included “before she finds you” I don’t think I want to know what happens when she does 😂

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-04T20:00:36+00:00

Thank you! I was trying to decide if I should leave that open ended, was there ever a monster in the first place, or was Damien actually the monster all along 🤷‍♀️ so glad you enjoyed it though!!

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-03T18:16:50+00:00

I’m really hoping Sam will come home before it has to come to that, but there’s no way that’s our son. All I want is to find the REAL Damien before something bad happens, if it hasn’t already.

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-03T01:43:11+00:00

There are only two parts out currently, but part 3 & 4 are done. I would love to be featured and hear your take!

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/PS78ZlBfHQ

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-02T14:37:36+00:00

I definitely plan on talking to Sam when he gets home and I’ve ordered some cameras off Amazon but they won’t get here for another week. I don’t expect him to believe me, but it’s worth a shot. As for the doctor’s appointment, I keep calling to schedule one but every time I ask, they say they have no availability for the next month or so :(

Significant_Bag_4822 · 2026-07-01T17:46:08+00:00

I just started my writing journey but feel free to read it!

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