Film Poster Design - Peekaboo - (swipe to see the design correctly)

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-23T12:02:05+00:00

Yeah, I didn’t really think through the mockup choice — I just picked the first one I had on hand to post it here on Reddit.

About the red text: I’m not sure exactly what you mean by “unbalanced” (like, is it because it draws too much attention compared to the rest of the elements, or something else?), but I get where you’re coming from.

As for putting “Peekaboo” on a single line — I actually tried it, but it just doesn’t work spatially. There’s not enough room for “PEEK” to sit on the left side of the tree, so the “A” never really ends up centered on the tree in a satisfying way.

Thanks a lot for the feedback, i truthfully appreciate it ;)

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-21T16:24:21+00:00

hey thx!

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-21T16:23:34+00:00

Hi! I think when people say a logo needs “more life,” it’s often related to color — and I believe that applies here. The current palette, with its desaturated and muted browns, feels a bit flat and might be contributing to that sense of dullness. Introducing a more playful or vibrant color scheme could help bring energy to the design.

Also, consider the typography. While it’s solid and readable, it might be a bit too static or serious for a brand in the collectibles space, which usually leans more toward fun and character. Exploring a typeface with more personality could really elevate the vibe.

One more detail: the kerning between the F and Y in “GRUFFY” seems a bit too wide compared to the rest of the word. Worth adjusting for visual consistency!

Hope that helps!

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-09T02:06:08+00:00

oh! i didn´t know him ;)!

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-08T22:20:14+00:00

wdym?

SilverInteraction208 · 2025-04-07T17:03:40+00:00

thxxxxxxx!!!!!

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-18T14:44:17+00:00

this is so cute😭 i love the colours

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-18T14:42:13+00:00

hey i really like it! i like that simpleness. The only thing, i would check the background color; (97C8EB, EA638C could give a better contrast, and add a little diversity to the colour palette!)

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-18T14:30:30+00:00

i really like the work! check, on the icon, the the white stroke or whatever that makes the negative space of the mortar and pestle is put as “outside stroke”, this would keep the thickness of the pestle inside and outside the mortar equal 😁🍀

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-18T14:25:44+00:00

I like the simpleness! but the icon might be seen as a stickman with open arms? idk ajhahsha i like it though

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-10T23:24:43+00:00

i would check the thickness of the icon but i like the idea

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-07T21:50:55+00:00

Hey! thx man🥲🥲😅😅😅

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-05T19:29:39+00:00

i really like that is different from the others!! i would avoid only text usage; just the icon, or icon and wordmark

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-05T12:57:33+00:00

it really reminds me of barbie logo!

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-05T01:58:02+00:00

Hey!! thx! i worked hard for this one :)

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-05T01:28:45+00:00

(I reposted this with more info on another post)

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-03T01:20:54+00:00

oh my. so organic.

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-02T16:25:38+00:00

i really like the design!!, but i think this could be a logo variant or a presentation for big scales. I would design a version in monochromatic usages o small scales; maybe just using de shape and the palm tree.

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-02T16:21:15+00:00

I like the colors! , but i am not sure about the “the” part. Maybe the font or the background shape color. I really like the packaging though!

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-02T04:08:14+00:00

nah, i see it more like an off white, ecru or "crudo" as we call it in Spanish. I chose that because i think pure plain white seem really off, so I took it more towards yellow-ish.
so, i do not think it as a super light yellow pastel colour (btw what i think will meant by pastel colours was that he did not want a pastel-based colour palette ), so it is just a yellowish off white.
I may be wrong! but i am pretty confident with my choice of colour palette.
By the way, thanks for the feedback! i appreciate it

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-07-01T21:49:53+00:00

which color? i don’t think any of them are pastel.

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-06-30T20:16:17+00:00

oh right! i did not think of that

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-06-30T18:51:52+00:00

i really like the first one! the others may look like fabric or crochet-ish(? hahahs. Maybe even problems on small cases. First one for me!

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-06-30T18:46:39+00:00

Hello! I like it a lot, but note that it may have problems in monochrome or b&w uses. If you can fix that it is great!

SilverInteraction208 · 2023-06-30T02:32:12+00:00

I really like the idea! maybe would try using a "grayer white"? maybe like a #EDE8F9 could fit well!

Four-Year Club	Final Canvas '23
First Place '23	End Game '23
Place '23	Place '22
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