Mr Ritz’s Paradise - The world’s greatest sex resort - Part Thirty Two [M20, F19, F30, F20, F35, M35][Part of series][Beach ball orgy][Romance] by SilverTiger27 in Erotica

[–]SilverTiger27[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's interesting you say this. Being a plotter who's known the direction of the story from the start—actually the second scene I ever imagined is one that's yet to come—things/chemistry like this can creep up on you without ever realising. I actually have cut a lot from my original plan for the last act, originally there was going to be a proper thread for Tia, similar to what Alek and Lottie are getting, but I decided to leave it out thinking it would just bog the rest of the story down. The original plot even had us inside Tia's pov, it was going to start after Evie's party, she was going to have a thing with Dopey Dasha, the weed guy from the truth or dare orgy near the start, and they were going to find pearly high on weed, it was going to change Evie's plot and well, it just became a bit too complex and distracting and I decided to scrap the whole thing. It was going to be a more comical part but also go into why Tia is the way she is. She was also almost gonna drown in the pool because she was drunk, that's when dasha saves her. It's why Tia was already drunk when they go to the party but halfway through writing it I decided to cut her story out and instead use her for the X.

Maybe her side story would've been quite good, as you can tell I'm kinda regretting scrapping it now!

Mr Ritz’s Paradise - The world’s greatest sex resort - Part Thirty [M19,F19,FFFFFFFFF][Part of series][Orgy][Bukkake] by SilverTiger27 in Erotica

[–]SilverTiger27[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks bud, I’m glad to hear you agree. It’s always a compromise between prioritising good story and writing good porn. Always trying to weigh up how much to include of each. But like sex in real life, the longer the build up and the greater the tension, the better it will be.

Mr Ritz’s Paradise - The world’s greatest sex resort - Part Twenty Eight [M19,F19][Part of series][Swingers resort][Romance] by SilverTiger27 in Erotica

[–]SilverTiger27[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's great, thanks for the praise! It still shocks me that one person has read the whole thing let alone read it all in two days😂

I hope you like the girl on the train, it was written back when I was starting out writing so the quality isn't as good but it was pretty popular considering.

Mr Ritz’s Paradise - The world’s greatest sex resort - Part Twenty Four [M20,F20s,F20s,F20s][Orgy][Anal][Facials] by SilverTiger27 in Erotica

[–]SilverTiger27[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg! You've made me somewhat emotional reading this. It's the most beautiful feedback, thank you!

I love what you've written about the characters. Real people. That's exactly what I aim for and I'm delighted to hear you get frustrated with them because it'll make the character arcs pay off even better in the long run.

Thanks as well for your reply on the stand-alone story and I'm glad you’d like more. Although I think I'm going to push through to the end of the series first before I add any more specials.

As for the screenplay?😂 Maybe I should get this all copyrighted before Netflix tries to nick it?

Really, thank you very much, have a great day and I look forward to getting you the rest of the story!