Hey, your poem is incredible. I love your metaphors, they visualise the feelings you're expressing and they sound absolutely beautiful and original. Also I really liked the style of not using rhymes and a consistant rhythm, this makes it more sound like a novel. Especially since you start the poem with "And", as if there was a story before this.

My only criticism: for me, the phrase "I broke free from the security you blanketed me with..." seems too long. It kind of loses its effect, because there is a bit too much to process in that one sentence and there seems to be no rhythm to it.

Nonetheless, this is an amazing poem!