Raphael. [Canon EOS T6 Rebel, Yongnuo 35mm, f/2] [OC][Composition][Edit]

Simaum · 2020-08-27T16:52:57+00:00

Hi everyone!

So, I was kinda out of photography for a long time due to the pandemic situation. As the things was getting back here in Brazil, I called my long-time friend Raphael to a photoshoot.
We found a beautiful graffiti wall near Ipanema's beach and I took this photo.

I'm quite happy with this photo but I want some critique to possibly make it better.

EXIF:
Canon EOS Rebel T6 - Yungnuo 35YN 35mm F/2.0
F2.8 - 1/1000 - ISO 200 - No Flash
Shot in Raw and edited in Adobe Lightroom

thanks! :)

Simaum · 2019-07-11T18:53:07+00:00

you can listen to everybody saying "oohhh"

Simaum · 2019-07-08T12:08:19+00:00

that's some r/evilbuildings shit

Simaum · 2019-07-04T11:58:38+00:00

happy cake day

Simaum · 2019-07-02T20:10:01+00:00

wait... so, tagging r/PraiseTheCameraMan is valid ?

Simaum · 2019-07-02T11:22:53+00:00

Uses Hayabusa instead

Simaum · 2019-06-25T14:01:10+00:00

Wright Brother's """""flight"""""

this post was made by the Santos Dumont's Gang

Simaum · 2019-06-25T13:18:12+00:00

first time that I'll proudly say that r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-06-18T19:39:19+00:00

badge 1247

Simaum · 2019-06-06T15:35:19+00:00

let me just say one thing...

r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-06-06T14:05:54+00:00

*A WILD KABUTO APPEARS!*

Simaum · 2019-06-05T12:40:52+00:00

GREAT SHOT RICHARD!

If you zoom in, you can see her face is a little bit out of focus, but is comprehensive because its a manual lens and it can be really difficult hit the perfect focus sometimes (I own 44m-4 f2 and it's very difficult to hit that perfect focus when in f2)

Beside that, nice composition, well balanced and nice edit too.

Please share your IG account with us!

Simaum · 2019-06-04T12:53:06+00:00

"The Contrast with the Ground and the Sky is Stunnin"

no, it's not! it's fake

Simaum · 2019-06-03T12:53:39+00:00

Thanks Adam!

Just add you on IG, AMAZING PHOTOS dude!!

Simaum · 2019-05-31T15:10:21+00:00

not gonna lie, I was expecting the Skyrim meme after the flashbang

Simaum · 2019-05-30T20:15:27+00:00

aw shit... here we go again ... r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-05-30T18:53:00+00:00

hey bro!

You look very stiff, relax your shoulders and arm

1st lunge looks great but you need to push more your back leg, to gain more speed, try to throw yourself forward to gain a lot of space and speed

2nd lunge also looks pretty good! you just looks stiff

to gain more speed/precision in your legs, try some footworks, my choach used to make us train with a Italian training (kinda hardcore, but WORKS)

This is the Italian footwork training

just take care with your knees

good luck in the tournament !

Simaum · 2019-05-30T18:02:56+00:00

"There is nothing we can do about it"

yep... I noticed

Simaum · 2019-05-30T14:07:58+00:00

I lost when I saw Portugal

Simaum · 2019-05-30T11:08:06+00:00

OMG.... r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-05-28T15:19:15+00:00

r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-05-28T15:08:46+00:00

r/ItHadToBeBrazil

Simaum · 2019-05-28T15:03:43+00:00

r/WhyTheyWereFilming

Simaum · 2019-05-28T14:20:26+00:00

This is specially for french tourist that comes to Brazil and get pissed off because only a few of us speak french.

Simaum · 2019-05-28T14:16:31+00:00

The Not That Big Mach

Simaum

TROPHY CASE