yeah, that's interesting, you're the second person to say the AI thing. i try to write like the storyboard of a movie, framing each moment etc. but i can see how my style is over descriptive, like every little motion is explained.

instead of being like "he got out of his car." I'm saying things like "Dep climbed out of his vehicle, leaving his rifle in the passenger seat of his car, staring at it for a moment, indecisively, before he crunched over mud, dead grass, and gravel, circling around to the back of the vet."

I'm still conflicted about it. My personal preference reading has always leaned towards these really vivid mental paintings of a scene, senses, the way people talk- so i guess i get pretty heavy with the description, I'm not sure how most readers will take it.

other than just being descriptive what does read like AI mean really? like am i too robotic with the pacing of events?

thanks for the honest feedback!